Tanka For a Feast In Heaven

brewing for so long over the fire in heaven's hearth becoming noticed by its inviting aroma seasoned venison Caroline Cécile © 09.06.12

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Ravindra K Kapoor

Date: 9/19/2012 5:26:00 AM

Like a wonderful feast your poem has the aroma to stimulate the appetite. Excellent.Thanks Caroline for yr wonderful & kind comments but I have placed this Poem as a Photo Poem & it has already been sent on all my links. I appreciate your words & wonderful suggestions. I can make a second Photo for you in the format you like it more & mail it to you as gift from a PS friend but pl. send me what actually you want it to be by your mail on kapoor_skk@yahoo.com. Love & best wishes. Ravindra