Tanka Feb 3
huddled together
from the sheeting rain
the unbrellas mob the hearse-
then in twos
slowly separate
NOTE:Essentially a tanka in English is a 3 line hiku(SHOW)& a 2 line couplet (TELL) comment
Copyright © Brian Strand | Year Posted 2022
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