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Tanka Element Hiku and Couplet

spoor tracks imprint the virgin snow- footsteps of yesteryear echo in my mind | Year Posted 2007

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Date: 9/18/2021 6:32:00 AM
What a difference one word can make to create an image.
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Date: 9/17/2021 8:05:00 PM
Excellent for the imagination, Brian. I'm thinking, Mammoths. I like, the haiku transformation into a tanka.
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Brian Strand
Date: 9/18/2021 12:46:00 AM
Yes Harry in reality the two go together

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