Tanka Element Hiku and Couplet

spoor tracks
imprint
the virgin snow-

footsteps of yesteryear
echo in my mind

 | Year Posted 2007
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Rodrigues Avatar
September 18, 2021 at 6:32 AM
What a difference one word can make to create an image.
Horsman Avatar
September 17, 2021 at 8:05 PM
Excellent for the imagination, Brian. I'm thinking, Mammoths. I like, the haiku transformation into a tanka.
Strand Avatar
September 18, 2021 at 12:46 AM
Yes Harry in reality the two go together
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