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Tanka Contest

skin to skin so hot
shyness takes over, fear rules
love cannot be stopped
love rules over fear, which wins?
the winner decides who won
© 12/12/2012

Copyright © Mandy Tams The Golden Girl | Year Posted 2012

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Painted Hunter Date: 12/15/2012 3:56:00 PM Hi Mandi. Yeah its been a while and its good to hear from you. Great tanka here. Login to Reply Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 12/16/2012 3:24:00 AM Hi Caleb thanks my friend xx

Holly Moore Date: 12/15/2012 11:42:00 AM Okay! That is clever. Very nice...Thanks for your comments on my poem..Hugs, Holly Login to Reply Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 12/16/2012 3:26:00 AM Hi there and thanks Holly xx

Andrea Dietrich Date: 12/15/2012 12:54:00 AM Mandy, this is very nice. It's for a tanka contest? I believe you need one more line of seven syllables at the bottom. Tanka have five lines. Luv, Andrea Login to Reply Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 12/15/2012 3:44:00 AM Thanks Andy its a good job you are there to tell me love xx

Sandra Adams Date: 12/14/2012 7:14:00 PM if it's real love, it wins over fear...but if not then perhaps fear will prevail... nice tanka, good luck with the contest :) Login to Reply Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 12/15/2012 3:45:00 AM Thanks Sandra love xx

Sara Kendrick Date: 12/14/2012 5:46:00 PM Reads like a winner..Enjoyed reading this eve..Thanks for stopping by with congrats...Sara Login to Reply Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 12/15/2012 3:46:00 AM My pleasure love xx

Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 12/14/2012 8:20:00 AM Fear excludes love, love overcomes fear, You win Mandy! Beautifully stated. Demetrios Login to Reply Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 12/14/2012 9:08:00 AM Thanks Demetrios xx

Rollo West Date: 12/13/2012 10:35:00 PM Hi mandy, this is really a great Tanka my friend, good luck in the contest. Rollo Login to Reply Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 12/14/2012 2:17:00 AM Thanks Rollo i keep reading yours to learn by xx

Connie Gildersleeve Date: 12/13/2012 6:23:00 PM Mandy this is a great love Tanka. Steamy and hot. Good luck on the contest. It reads like a win. Warm Wishes Always, Connie Login to Reply Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 12/14/2012 2:17:00 AM Thanks Connie love, its a cold day need to warm up some how xx

Harry Horsman Date: 12/13/2012 9:18:00 AM true love always will win, i'm sure of that Mandy... nice Tanka, like this...... Login to Reply Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 12/13/2012 9:43:00 AM Thanks harry xx

Jancarl Campi Date: 12/13/2012 8:45:00 AM WOW!! I am seeing a bit of steam coming from these lines. Quite enjoyable. Take care and watch for crazy elves. Jancarl Login to Reply Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 12/13/2012 9:43:00 AM Steamy stuff Jancarl lol xx