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Tanka Contest

skin to skin so hot shyness takes over, fear rules love cannot be stopped love rules over fear, which wins? the winner decides who won © 12/12/2012

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Painted Hunter
Date: 12/15/2012 3:56:00 PM
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Hi Mandi. Yeah its been a while and its good to hear from you. Great tanka here.
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 12/16/2012 3:24:00 AM
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Hi Caleb thanks my friend xx
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Holly Moore
Date: 12/15/2012 11:42:00 AM
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Okay! That is clever. Very nice...Thanks for your comments on my poem..Hugs, Holly
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 12/16/2012 3:26:00 AM
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Hi there and thanks Holly xx
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 12/15/2012 12:54:00 AM
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Mandy, this is very nice. It's for a tanka contest? I believe you need one more line of seven syllables at the bottom. Tanka have five lines. Luv, Andrea
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 12/15/2012 3:44:00 AM
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Thanks Andy its a good job you are there to tell me love xx
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Sandra Adams
Date: 12/14/2012 7:14:00 PM
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if it's real love, it wins over fear...but if not then perhaps fear will prevail... nice tanka, good luck with the contest :)
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 12/15/2012 3:45:00 AM
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Thanks Sandra love xx
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/14/2012 5:46:00 PM
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Reads like a winner..Enjoyed reading this eve..Thanks for stopping by with congrats...Sara
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 12/15/2012 3:46:00 AM
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My pleasure love xx
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 12/14/2012 8:20:00 AM
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Fear excludes love, love overcomes fear, You win Mandy! Beautifully stated. Demetrios
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 12/14/2012 9:08:00 AM
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Thanks Demetrios xx
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Rollo West
Date: 12/13/2012 10:35:00 PM
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Hi mandy, this is really a great Tanka my friend, good luck in the contest. Rollo
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 12/14/2012 2:17:00 AM
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Thanks Rollo i keep reading yours to learn by xx
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Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 12/13/2012 6:23:00 PM
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Mandy this is a great love Tanka. Steamy and hot. Good luck on the contest. It reads like a win. Warm Wishes Always, Connie
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 12/14/2012 2:17:00 AM
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Thanks Connie love, its a cold day need to warm up some how xx
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Harry Horsman
Date: 12/13/2012 9:18:00 AM
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true love always will win, i'm sure of that Mandy... nice Tanka, like this......
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 12/13/2012 9:43:00 AM
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Thanks harry xx
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Jancarl Campi
Date: 12/13/2012 8:45:00 AM
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WOW!! I am seeing a bit of steam coming from these lines. Quite enjoyable. Take care and watch for crazy elves. Jancarl
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 12/13/2012 9:43:00 AM
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Steamy stuff Jancarl lol xx

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