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Tanka 8

Tanka 8
	
	
	your dark eyes... your lips 
	are just barely visible
	despite the darkness
	as veiled as they are exposed
	tender... and perhaps wounded

Copyright © Jack Jordan | Year Posted 2013

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October 3, 2013 at 5:46 PM

Wow...The whole tanka is a stunner, but the last line is absolutely LOADED! I'm speechless...

October 3, 2013 at 8:48 PM

Tim, thank you for the compliment. I really appreciate it... Jack

September 30, 2013 at 12:33 AM

lovey tanka Jack...I really like this one...

Shadow Hamilton

September 28, 2013 at 1:19 PM

deep write full of feelings Jack well written Shadow x smile

September 28, 2013 at 1:21 PM

Thanks, Shadow, for the nice comment... Jack

September 28, 2013 at 10:12 AM

oh my, you floored me , jack... sensitive piece so lovely!..:) huggs

September 28, 2013 at 1:22 PM

Thanks, Nette. I always respect your opinion... Jack

Andrea Dietrich

September 28, 2013 at 8:55 AM

wow, this is gorgeous, Jack!!!

September 28, 2013 at 10:06 AM

Thank you, Andrea. That's a very nice compliment... Jack

September 28, 2013 at 4:45 AM

Nice theme, Jack

September 28, 2013 at 7:28 AM

Thank you. I appreciate the comment... Jack

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