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Tanka

Phonetics of hurt Brimming passionately Tears Cascading my cheeks Hope drowns blinding my Visions Heaving sigh crushing my chest ------------------ This as traditional TANKA as possible 57577 format, no titles included

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015


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Beata Agustin
Date: 9/17/2024 6:30:00 AM
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Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 2/21/2016 6:44:00 PM
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Sam, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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Skat A
Date: 12/29/2015 6:41:00 PM
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SAM, a pleasure to read :) HAVE YOURSELF A HAPPY NEW YEAR ...... SKAT LOVE
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Casarah Nance
Date: 2/11/2015 8:58:00 PM
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ooh i like it! powerful and emotional in short form. :) Great job :)
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Jan Allison
Date: 2/11/2015 5:56:00 PM
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oh so deep and sad Sam - very vivid imagery:-) a 7 from me :-) Hugs Jan xx 7 xx
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