Tanka

Phonetics of hurt

Brimming passionately
Tears

Cascading my cheeks

Hope drowns blinding my
Visions

Heaving sigh crushing my chest

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This as traditional TANKA as possible

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Beata Agustin

September 17, 2024 at 6:30 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.