Jack Jordan Poet Tanka

Tanka 4 - Treasure of My Soul

Tanka 4 – Treasure of My Soul
	
	dampness of your skin
	wet hair dripping down your back
	glancing toward me
	one small laugh escapes your lips
	a deep treasure of my soul
	
	
	For Gail Angel Doyle’s “Treasures of your soul” contest

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Debbie Duncan August 19, 2013 at 5:18 PM Oh, I love this Jack,,,, kinda reminds me of my Sweet Ecstasy ;} you have a great day . Jack Jordan August 19, 2013 at 5:32 PM It has been a good day. I'm glad you enjoyed the poem... Jack

Lucilla Carrillo August 4, 2013 at 7:25 PM Hi Jack; This is short, good. Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest..... Lucilla Jack Jordan August 19, 2013 at 5:32 PM Thanks, Lucilla, but the contest didn't happen. I'm not sure why... Jack

Karen Anglesey July 31, 2013 at 6:36 AM Every line a treasured meaning. Beautiful in this poetry form. Delicious :) Jack Jordan July 31, 2013 at 7:43 AM Thank you, Karen. I appreciate the very nice compliment... Jack

Nette Onclaud July 29, 2013 at 12:31 PM wellll, you said it so richly in just a few words, jack...simple delights are treasures, and this is a treasure of a piece!..:) huggs Jack Jordan July 29, 2013 at 1:56 PM Thank you,Nette. Very kind comments... Jack

Sara Kendrick July 27, 2013 at 9:09 AM Ahhh!! Romantic..Sara Jack Jordan July 27, 2013 at 11:12 AM Thank you for the comment, Sara... Jack

Richard Lamoureux July 27, 2013 at 6:42 AM This is so romantic and sexy. I have the picture flickering on my mind. Jack Jordan July 27, 2013 at 8:18 AM Mine too. If it ever actually happened to me, It was long ago. Thanks for the comment, Richard... Jack

Donna Jones July 26, 2013 at 1:44 PM Jack I can hear and feel the moment!!!! CAPTURED!! Jack Jordan July 26, 2013 at 2:52 PM Thanks for the compliment. I'm glad you liked it... Jack

Andrea Dietrich July 25, 2013 at 11:40 PM This must be the new contest of Gail's? Wow, you nailed it!!! Jack Jordan July 26, 2013 at 8:51 AM Thanks! Tanka are difficult for me. Maybe I just don't have 31syllables in me all the time... Jack

Anne-Lise Andresen July 25, 2013 at 6:18 AM - Jack, this is beautiful!! - Cross my fingers and hope it will win the contest!! - Have a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :) Jack Jordan July 25, 2013 at 6:48 AM Thanks, Anne Lise, for the good wishes... Jack

Poet Tacito July 24, 2013 at 5:18 PM Yes! The simple pleasures of it all! I love a lady with the wet hair look. Awesome! Jack Jordan July 24, 2013 at 5:44 PM Thanks, Drake. Simple pleasures indeed... Jack