Tanka:

Your face unwrinkles
You are imponderable
In your vast silence
In your deep, dark blue embrace
Who dares breach your salty keep?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Dietrich Avatar
April 19, 2014 at 12:10 AM
very interesting words used here. What a great personification of ocean.
Dom Avatar
April 20, 2014 at 10:15 PM
Ta Andrea. :-)
Tacito Avatar
July 15, 2013 at 10:48 AM
DAMN! Fantastic & thought-provoking. Love how this flowed!
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