Tanka 3

Tanka 3
		
		
	morning comes, careless 
	tender circumstances, then 
	empty good-bye eyes 
	said it all led to nothing 
	a man of her yesterday
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Dietrich Avatar
July 24, 2013 at 3:16 PM
yep!! and it was a good one. Another time I will go to your other pages.
Jordan Avatar
July 24, 2013 at 3:50 PM
I really appreciate your being a reader. Please feel free to tell me if you have suggestions for improvement. I have a tough skin where criticism is concerned... Jack
Dietrich Avatar
June 2, 2013 at 3:57 PM
I really enjoyed this one.
Jordan Avatar
June 2, 2013 at 4:11 PM
Thanks... It's awfully sad, which is what happens with me after several overcast days.
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