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Tanka 3

Tanka 3 morning comes, careless tender circumstances, then empty good-bye eyes said it all led to nothing a man of her yesterday

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 7/24/2013 3:16:00 PM
yep!! and it was a good one. Another time I will go to your other pages.
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Jack Jordan
Date: 7/24/2013 3:50:00 PM
I really appreciate your being a reader. Please feel free to tell me if you have suggestions for improvement. I have a tough skin where criticism is concerned... Jack
Date: 6/2/2013 3:57:00 PM
I really enjoyed this one.
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Date: 6/2/2013 4:11:00 PM
Thanks... It's awfully sad, which is what happens with me after several overcast days.

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