Tanka 2



Swirling clouds twisting
High above the silent town
Constant movement with
Starlight illuminating
A scene of grace and beauty

artbeautycolorjoytanka

♡Like0

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Andrea Dietrich

March 30, 2015 at 2:11 PM

Nice description, Shane. I am hearing of funny poems you are producing. Let me try to find one!

Shane Cooper

March 30, 2015 at 9:20 PM

I wrote some footles in whichI tried to be funny, you can judge for yourself if I made the grade. I don't think I am even in Jan's ballpark though. Too much sad sack in me. Love Shane xxx

Anne-Lise Andresen

March 30, 2015 at 7:26 AM

:) my friend !!!

Shane Cooper

March 30, 2015 at 7:31 AM

you do know you are a treasure don't you!!!! I wish I could, but my heart just will not play anymore. You take care of yourself you are special people! love Shanexxx

Anne-Lise Andresen

March 26, 2015 at 1:46 PM

- Shane my friend, the words floating in beautifully inks - Enjoy reading this tanka poem, it's a winner poem in my eyes - (7) - I have never written a Tanka - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Shane Cooper

March 30, 2015 at 12:48 AM

Hello Anne-Lise, Thank you for your kind words but the poem is fundamentally flawed. It is not really a Tanka. I have tried to rewrite it but i am not a good enough trainee poet to find the words i need. I will withdraw it soon. love Shane xxx

Jan Allison

March 26, 2015 at 8:06 AM

wonderful image and imagery I struggle so hard with this form:-) Hugs jan xx

Shane Cooper

March 26, 2015 at 8:42 AM

Maybe, but they look pretty good to me. :-) <3<3

Jan Allison

March 26, 2015 at 8:26 AM

I have more than my fair share of N/A HM lol - I write for fun and try to impress the sponsors - hey ho its just poetry. I find tanka and haiku hard to get right - still got a long way to go before I get it right:-) Hugs Jan xx

Shane Cooper

March 26, 2015 at 8:20 AM

At least my dear friend you place in competitions I get the dreaded N/A. GREEN WITH ENVY, AISLE SEA EWE and MOONLIGHT SHADOW, your last three posts are all way beyond the standard, as I said you are in a whole new ball park with these writes. They are wonderful. love Shane xxx

Casarah Nance

March 26, 2015 at 7:44 AM

It is a beautiful piece of art and a wonderful write to go with it :) Hugs xxx

Casarah Nance

March 26, 2015 at 8:39 AM

Thank you for bringing so much wonderful art into our lives, it doesn't have to be writing, but painting and music, it all soothes the soul. :)

Shane Cooper

March 26, 2015 at 8:23 AM

Hi Cas, glad you jumped into my wee little bowl for a look see! Van Gough is my number one fav artist. He was a master poet but instead of quils he used brushes. take care and enjoy the rest of your week love Shane xxx