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Tanka 1 About Smudged Roses

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Inspired by Chris'tanka contest ~Now, for the contest :)

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Justin Bordner

April 24, 2014 at 1:56 PM

Not to get lost in translation, love life today and not tomorrow. Your deep write elicits this in my soul, thank you Charma. J.A.B.

Joe Maverick

April 20, 2014 at 4:02 AM

Well done Charmaine, I must say I am impressed with the quality of all the writes I have been reading for the contest'

Skat A

April 16, 2014 at 6:05 PM

, Congratulations, enjoyed stopping by. HAVE A NICE DAY CHARMA--- Luv ~SKAT~

Andrea Dietrich

April 15, 2014 at 6:28 PM

Charma, a big congratulations to you, sweetest of the roses. Please come back to soup. You have many fans awaiting you!!!

Sara Kendrick

April 15, 2014 at 2:54 PM

Way to go with this winning work..Congrats..Sara

Carrie Richards

April 14, 2014 at 11:38 AM

I am so honored to share this spot with your talent. This tanka has found me going back to read and read, and each time with more insight, and respect for the metaphoric beauty. Lovely work, Charmaine!

Michael Dom

April 14, 2014 at 11:25 AM

Hey Charma, I think the priest grew a rose bush and the fragrance is glorious. Cheers!

Richard Lamoureux

April 14, 2014 at 11:11 AM

So glad to see this one on the winners list. Congratulations.

Michael Dom

April 1, 2014 at 3:16 AM

reminds of the priest in line for fish&chips, watching a young couple as the vinegar is sprinkled run through...cheers&thanks for this tanka.

James Peranteau

March 29, 2014 at 8:01 PM

You've got mine attention dear poet ! *smiles* And a winkers and hug for your true lil' love ! Have a blessed weekend....much love, james

Darren Watson

March 29, 2014 at 2:25 PM

You will never be forgotten petal .

Andrea Dietrich

March 29, 2014 at 10:24 AM

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Andrea Dietrich

March 29, 2014 at 10:21 AM

charma, it is so nice to see a post of yours today. I enjoyed reading your tanka, sweetie.

Richard Lamoureux

March 29, 2014 at 9:02 AM

Good morning Charmaine.

Scott Thirtyseven

March 28, 2014 at 5:34 PM

I'm off to the second. Best of luck with the comp.

Jeremy Street

March 28, 2014 at 4:35 PM

This Is Quite Inspiring In Profound Actually...We Find So Much Love Inside It's Words....Very Beautiful! Truly, And I Too Shall View Your Treasures Other Verse...Yours Truly, Jeremy

Demetrios Trifiatis

March 28, 2014 at 11:15 AM

In the past though the living flower has shared its beauty with whom he held it! Moving and touching, dear Charmaine!

Anne-Lise Andresen

March 28, 2014 at 4:22 AM

- Just lovely, Charmaine !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Richard Lamoureux

March 27, 2014 at 8:04 PM

You have captured my attention, off to read the second one.

Liam Mcdaid

March 27, 2014 at 3:59 PM

very beautiful dear friend

Paul Callus

March 27, 2014 at 12:56 PM

Glad to see you posting again. (didn't know of f-i-l) Beautiful double tanka...but then I also enjoyed Haiku 55 :) // paul

Paul Callus

April 14, 2014 at 6:20 PM

congrats on your merited win :) // paul

Charmaine Chircop

March 27, 2014 at 11:20 AM

Tnks for those friends who kept my father -in- law in prayer.His operation was a success..and He is now in the process of recovery ..Hugs and love Charma