Tanka 1

I call out your name.
But, you never answer me.
You are always there.
I try to reach out to you.
You’re a shadow in my mind.


© Holly P. Moore
    October 2012
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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October 25, 2012 at 4:31 AM
Good emotional tanka.Lovely read.
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October 20, 2012 at 6:45 AM
Holly now you are cooking on gas, as we say here, your wings are spreading very nicely indeed, good luck and keep going...David
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October 20, 2012 at 4:58 AM
He knows your love and he watches over you..he sent you white feathers didn't he? Another touching poem from the heart.
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