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Tanka

I stare at the sky all day long, wondering if I'll last or be gone, the ocean tides rise till neck can't tell apart life and death

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Date: 12/9/2024 9:58:00 PM
Life and death are the same but different in degrees. I love it! Can’t wait to read more of your art work.
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Date: 12/9/2024 8:19:00 AM
Great first poem on here, welcome to poetry soup. Tom
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Date: 12/9/2024 8:22:00 AM
Thankyou sir!
Date: 12/9/2024 8:06:00 AM
Emotive!
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Date: 12/9/2024 8:14:00 AM
Thankyou, good ma'am/sir!

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