Rama Balasubramanian Poet Pleiades

Tanka

Tanka contains five lines
This form of poetry 
takes us to a moment
that brings ecstasy in 
the mind of the reader 
through fixed syllables count
totalling thirty one

03rd February 2022
For pleiades poetry contest, Joseph May
Syllables checked at PS

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Paula Goldsmith February 25, 2022 at 1:34 PM Congratulations on your win. A fun write. Have a great/blessed day writing away..................

Christuraj Alex February 20, 2022 at 3:38 AM A great definition and description of Tanka. Congratulations! Rama Balasubramanian February 21, 2022 at 5:27 AM Thanks

Janice Canerdy February 19, 2022 at 5:05 PM Excellent, Rama! CONGRATS!! Janice Rama Balasubramanian February 21, 2022 at 5:27 AM Thanks

Connie Marcum Wong February 19, 2022 at 4:59 PM Excellent Rama! Congratulations on your first place win. Blessings xxoo Rama Balasubramanian February 21, 2022 at 5:27 AM Thanks

Joseph May February 19, 2022 at 3:33 PM Very nicely penned Rama, Congrats on your win Rama Balasubramanian February 21, 2022 at 5:27 AM Thanks

Darlene De Beaulieu February 3, 2022 at 3:08 PM Hello Rama, well done. Blessings. Darlene De Beaulieu February 6, 2022 at 12:01 PM Hello Rama, you are welcome. Blessings my friend. Rama Balasubramanian February 4, 2022 at 6:03 PM Thanks

Janice Canerdy February 3, 2022 at 8:11 AM Rama, you did a great job with this challenging prompt. Janice Rama Balasubramanian February 3, 2022 at 9:58 AM Thanks.