Tanka

small lake off highway
gold captured by stippled waters
reflections dancing
sun’s silent westward passage
into a river of dreams
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Dietrich Avatar
July 20, 2021 at 5:07 PM
revisiting this one. So gorgeous.
Dietrich Avatar
June 9, 2021 at 6:51 PM
Lovely, Mike.
Buhagiar Avatar
June 1, 2021 at 1:12 AM
Loved your imagery. I can picture the scene very well.
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