Tanka 12

Tanka 12
	
	
	dark skies fuel  
	my melancholy mood 
	winter’s cold rain  
	dampens down my writing mind
	deadens my ways with words
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Dietrich Avatar
November 24, 2013 at 2:37 AM
very nice tanka, Jack.
Jordan Avatar
November 24, 2013 at 11:43 AM
Thanks, Andrea, on this very gloomy day... Jack
Lamoureux Avatar
November 23, 2013 at 2:23 PM
Your words seem lively to me! So this is number 12, 88 to go Jack.
Jordan Avatar
November 24, 2013 at 11:43 AM
That's a bit daunting, but... Jack
Andresen Avatar
November 23, 2013 at 7:09 AM
- A touching / sad poem, Jack ..... maybe "Yellow boots sings" will give you a smile (???) - Have a great weekend, Jack! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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