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Tanka 10

Tanka 10
	
	
	richly colored kiss...
	hair-wisp falling on your face
	in twilight half-light 
	the moment I first knew you
	the moment you first knew me

Copyright © Jack Jordan | Year Posted 2013

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November 3, 2013 at 10:08 AM

allow me to swoon, jack... how affectionate this is..:) huggs

November 7, 2013 at 9:13 AM

You're allowed...

November 2, 2013 at 7:23 PM

You are great at expressing these moments Jack...

Andrea Dietrich

November 1, 2013 at 1:00 AM

fanTAStic. What a great tanka.

November 1, 2013 at 10:47 PM

Thanks, as always... Jack

Scott Thirtyseven

October 31, 2013 at 2:27 AM

Lovely, what a moment, so nicely captured.

Poet Destroyer A

October 26, 2013 at 1:12 PM

Jack, your poem is beautiful and loving.. the moment love meets.. always..LINDA

October 26, 2013 at 4:01 PM

Thank you, Linda, for the compliment... Jack

Anne-Lise Andresen

October 26, 2013 at 11:43 AM

- Truth and romance.... lovely Tanka, Jack ! - - I wish you a nice weekend ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

October 26, 2013 at 12:07 PM

Thanks, and a fun weekend to you as well... Jack

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