Tanka 04, No Title Fortanka - Sub: Winter

Lightning blinds minds eyes.
Thunder defens my lone heart
Static charged my pride.
Pouring rain drenched my sorrow
Cold dark winter dampens love.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Nance Avatar
July 11, 2014 at 7:46 AM
Oh I love this, what images!
Raj Avatar
July 12, 2014 at 2:08 AM
Thanks Casarah, For the visit, I like surprises. That's the beauty of tanka. TC :-)
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