Tango With a Mango

To tango with a mango;
now that would be sublime;
much sweeter than the bitterness of lime.

With a sticky passion fruit 
I did try to make it merry;
and, once, the innocence of unpicked cherry.

A banana in Havana
I tried, but once beneath the skin
I found it just a little soft, and pale, and thin.

A passion for papaya
gave me all my daily C;
but too much of it did not agree with me.

To moon with a prune
I thought I'd give it a try;
but found that a little wrinkly and dry.

A dapple with an apple?
But taken once a day,
soon become a little tired and gray.

So, I tango with a mango,
I do it all the time;
I tried once with an orange but couldn't make it rhyme.



A Merger With Food Poetry Contest, placed 1st
Sponsored by: Natasha L Scragg 
Date wrote: 9th May 2022
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Goldsmith Avatar
July 2, 2022 at 11:58 AM
Congratulations on your win. A "Cute" write. Sounds like you have a fruit salad. I Love Mangos. Have a blessed/weekend................
Miller Avatar
July 6, 2022 at 12:44 AM
Thank you so much Paula for your kind comment
James Avatar
June 24, 2022 at 2:51 PM
Enjoyed your cleverly written fruity poem. Can see this doing well in the contest. Emilia : )
Miller Avatar
June 25, 2022 at 9:19 AM
Thank you Emilia
Dietrich Avatar
May 16, 2022 at 10:05 AM
this was a very entertaining read. i was wondering if it was metaphorical when i got to the cherry but then the banana too? Hmmm, don't think so. I find mango to have a nasty texture so I only eat them dried. For me, it's watermelon or grapes!!!
Miller Avatar
May 30, 2022 at 2:50 PM
It could be Andrea, thank you for the visit and comments
Smith Avatar
May 10, 2022 at 12:25 AM
you certainly immersed yourself in this one Terry and would also lean towards the Mango although I might be tempted by a Guava. Also all Mango's are not born equal. This piece definitely ticks all the boxes for me. Best regards David in NZ
Miller Avatar
May 30, 2022 at 2:50 PM
Thank you David
Scragg Avatar
May 9, 2022 at 11:26 AM
This is excellent and added to faves!! It's a very fun read with humorous seasoning. Love it and the flow. :-D
Miller Avatar
May 30, 2022 at 2:51 PM
So glad you enjoyed it I had fun writing it too.
Hankins Avatar
May 9, 2022 at 8:28 AM
You've got it, Terry. For the life of me, I can't get this contest to work in my head. Yours is very creative. I see a winner!
Miller Avatar
May 30, 2022 at 2:51 PM
Thank you Milt
Kyser Avatar
May 9, 2022 at 4:14 AM
Superb, just put the kabosh on the squash and don’t be a felon with the melon. Like a berry, Terry, excellent!
Miller Avatar
May 30, 2022 at 2:51 PM
LOL Jeff
Scragg Avatar
May 9, 2022 at 11:25 AM
Lol
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