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Tango Teasing

One swift move tempting sunburned curls to find a whole new place across her face around vanilla shoulders dress clings to hips purple arranged on pouting lips, kohl around almond eyes calculating, investigating lustful look ~~~~~~~~ twirl, swirl, oh yes girl High heels tango, abrazo, hand on back, barrida full stop... freno breathless hunger Tango. Castigada *** May 15, 2017 Copyright © Darren White

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Jean Murray

Date: 5/18/2017 4:42:00 PM

That's that old rogue himself Willie Nelson. Darcy seems to be wearing shoulder pads and Richard is always wooden. Enough of them...I hunger for more poems like this Darren.

Darren White
Date: 5/18/2017 10:17:00 PM

I do write dance a lot of the time, stay tuned Jean ;)

Sara Ella

Date: 5/16/2017 7:22:00 PM

An artist with words! I can see the dancers and the dance <3 So lovely and HOT! Need to learn to tango!

Darren White
Date: 5/16/2017 11:50:00 PM

Hehe, yeah, It was harder than I expected, shaping the two dancers

Phillip Garcia

Date: 5/16/2017 1:49:00 PM

Very clever, young padowan. I don't know squiggly goo from the tango like you but I recognize excellent poetry when I waltz into it, cha cha cha

Darren White
Date: 5/16/2017 1:53:00 PM

Hah, thanks Phillip! Tango with me, cha cha cha!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 5/16/2017 1:47:00 PM

I love this Darren. The Argentine Tango is my favorite dance to watch. I would love to learn it one day. Your sultry words let's the dance draw us in. Beautiful! 7 ; )

Darren White
Date: 5/16/2017 1:52:00 PM

The most sensual dance of them all tegether with flamenco, really lovely and HOT :) Thanks Connie!

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 5/16/2017 12:14:00 PM

...back to deliver a 7, I was so swept away I forgot!

Darren White
Date: 5/16/2017 12:15:00 PM

;)

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 5/16/2017 12:05:00 PM

So lovely to tango with you! Thank you for this dance :) that was fun! xomo

Darren White
Date: 5/16/2017 12:10:00 PM

Heh, wasn't it? Dance with me!

Lisa Ricci

Date: 5/16/2017 11:15:00 AM

-- s m i l e --

Darren White
Date: 5/16/2017 12:10:00 PM

Arthur Vaso

Date: 5/16/2017 8:48:00 AM

This is so very creative!! Great poem!

Darren White
Date: 5/16/2017 8:55:00 AM

Thanks Art :)

Tim Smith

Date: 5/16/2017 7:57:00 AM

I'm breathless after reading your beautiful poem...I'll come back to see the video.

Darren White
Date: 5/16/2017 8:54:00 AM

LOL!!!

Tim Smith
Date: 5/16/2017 8:17:00 AM

I'm sure my 100 friends on the train will love it...lol

Darren White
Date: 5/16/2017 8:15:00 AM

Catch your breath and watch that vid! ;)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/16/2017 7:20:00 AM

What a lovely song, and even moreso, your verse! Ahh! Very nice, mon ami! Saving this one! Great way to start the morning! 7

Darren White
Date: 5/16/2017 7:24:00 AM

Thank you Kim :) Glad you like it in your early morning!

Anne-Marie Coreggia

Date: 5/16/2017 6:33:00 AM

I loved how your formatted this poem with first a vivid description of that first alluring moment when the dancers find themselves face to face and then their bodies twirling and swirling to the music. Et, aver la vidéo qui complémente si bien le tout, c'est parfait. Wonderfully done my friend. A fave:) Amitiés

Darren White
Date: 5/16/2017 6:47:00 AM

Oui, cette vidéo est fantastique, n'est-ce pas :) Yeah, I love that video. Thank you so very much for the fave my friend :)

Lisa Ricci

Date: 5/16/2017 6:17:00 AM

Good Afternoon Darren. This is beautifully perfect in construction and composition. The execution and presentation is marvelous. I love the tango and I also adore the paso. Oh the wonder and passion of it all. Well done entirely and completely Darren. Honestly. Have a good afternoon Penguin. -- smile --

Darren White
Date: 5/16/2017 6:45:00 AM

That passion, just as with the flamenco, is palpable, it's poetry in motion and pure lust :) And I love dancing it and witing it. Thanks Lisa!

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 5/16/2017 5:54:00 AM

My favourite is the tango...the argentinian tango...I love this...and am dancing in my mind :).Lovely dear Darren.

Darren White
Date: 5/16/2017 6:44:00 AM

Oh-la-la, so sensual, isn't it? I love it! Thank you!

Chris Green

Date: 5/16/2017 5:52:00 AM

Really nicely done my friend. Your talent is huge and never seems to quit. I love how you formatted this poem and the message, the melody and the way it moves as I read it. Bravo

Darren White
Date: 5/16/2017 6:32:00 AM

Thanks my friend. I hoped to show in the second part to show the man and woman dancing, but that's quite difficult :)

Jan Allison

Date: 5/16/2017 4:37:00 AM

Absolutely brilliant ... your words dance off the page Darren love the tantelising imagery in the first part of the poem - I have two left feet and am in awe of those who can dance. I like the clever way you formatted the final part of the poem:-) hugs Jan xx

Darren White
Date: 5/16/2017 5:07:00 AM

Hahaha Jan, sensual, eh? I love that part of the film :) Shame I can't dance anymore, or I would swim across the Canal and a bit further, and teach you ;)

Jan Allison
Date: 5/16/2017 4:43:00 AM

PHWARRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR just watched the clip oh Richard Gere and Colin Firth ... I need a cold shower now !!!:-) hugs Jan xx