Darren White Poet Rhyme

Tango Teasing

One swift move tempting
 sunburned curls to find 
     a whole new place
     across her face
           around vanilla shoulders
dress clings to hips
purple arranged on pouting  lips,
     kohl around almond eyes
     calculating, 
     investigating lustful look 
   
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           twirl,                          swirl,
     oh yes                        girl                  
 High heels tango,    abrazo,
hand on back,          barrida
 full stop...                 freno
   breathless                 hunger
       Tango.                       Castigada





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May 15, 2017 
Copyright © Darren White

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Jean Murray May 18, 2017 at 4:42 PM That's that old rogue himself Willie Nelson. Darcy seems to be wearing shoulder pads and Richard is always wooden. Enough of them...I hunger for more poems like this Darren. Darren White May 18, 2017 at 10:17 PM I do write dance a lot of the time, stay tuned Jean ;)

Sara Ella May 16, 2017 at 7:22 PM An artist with words! I can see the dancers and the dance <3 So lovely and HOT! Need to learn to tango! Darren White May 16, 2017 at 11:50 PM Hehe, yeah, It was harder than I expected, shaping the two dancers

Phillip Garcia May 16, 2017 at 1:49 PM Very clever, young padowan. I don't know squiggly goo from the tango like you but I recognize excellent poetry when I waltz into it, cha cha cha Darren White May 16, 2017 at 1:53 PM Hah, thanks Phillip! Tango with me, cha cha cha!

Connie Marcum Wong May 16, 2017 at 1:47 PM I love this Darren. The Argentine Tango is my favorite dance to watch. I would love to learn it one day. Your sultry words let's the dance draw us in. Beautiful! 7 ; ) Darren White May 16, 2017 at 1:52 PM The most sensual dance of them all tegether with flamenco, really lovely and HOT :) Thanks Connie!

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart May 16, 2017 at 12:14 PM ...back to deliver a 7, I was so swept away I forgot! Darren White May 16, 2017 at 12:15 PM ;)

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart May 16, 2017 at 12:05 PM So lovely to tango with you! Thank you for this dance :) that was fun! xomo Darren White May 16, 2017 at 12:10 PM Heh, wasn't it? Dance with me!

Lisa Ricci May 16, 2017 at 11:15 AM -- s m i l e -- Darren White May 16, 2017 at 12:10 PM :D

Arthur Vaso May 16, 2017 at 8:48 AM This is so very creative!! Great poem! Darren White May 16, 2017 at 8:55 AM Thanks Art :)

Tim Smith May 16, 2017 at 7:57 AM I'm breathless after reading your beautiful poem...I'll come back to see the video. Darren White May 16, 2017 at 8:54 AM LOL!!! Tim Smith May 16, 2017 at 8:17 AM I'm sure my 100 friends on the train will love it...lol Darren White May 16, 2017 at 8:15 AM Catch your breath and watch that vid! ;)

Kim Rodrigues May 16, 2017 at 7:20 AM What a lovely song, and even moreso, your verse! Ahh! Very nice, mon ami! Saving this one! Great way to start the morning! 7 Darren White May 16, 2017 at 7:24 AM Thank you Kim :) Glad you like it in your early morning!

Anne-Marie Coreggia May 16, 2017 at 6:33 AM I loved how your formatted this poem with first a vivid description of that first alluring moment when the dancers find themselves face to face and then their bodies twirling and swirling to the music. Et, aver la vidéo qui complémente si bien le tout, c'est parfait. Wonderfully done my friend. A fave:) Amitiés Darren White May 16, 2017 at 6:47 AM Oui, cette vidéo est fantastique, n'est-ce pas :) Yeah, I love that video. Thank you so very much for the fave my friend :)

Lisa Ricci May 16, 2017 at 6:17 AM Good Afternoon Darren. This is beautifully perfect in construction and composition. The execution and presentation is marvelous. I love the tango and I also adore the paso. Oh the wonder and passion of it all. Well done entirely and completely Darren. Honestly. Have a good afternoon Penguin. -- smile -- Darren White May 16, 2017 at 6:45 AM That passion, just as with the flamenco, is palpable, it's poetry in motion and pure lust :) And I love dancing it and witing it. Thanks Lisa!

Charmaine Chircop May 16, 2017 at 5:54 AM My favourite is the tango...the argentinian tango...I love this...and am dancing in my mind :).Lovely dear Darren. Darren White May 16, 2017 at 6:44 AM Oh-la-la, so sensual, isn't it? I love it! Thank you!

Chris Green May 16, 2017 at 5:52 AM Really nicely done my friend. Your talent is huge and never seems to quit. I love how you formatted this poem and the message, the melody and the way it moves as I read it. Bravo Darren White May 16, 2017 at 6:32 AM Thanks my friend. I hoped to show in the second part to show the man and woman dancing, but that's quite difficult :)

Jan Allison May 16, 2017 at 4:37 AM Absolutely brilliant ... your words dance off the page Darren love the tantelising imagery in the first part of the poem - I have two left feet and am in awe of those who can dance. I like the clever way you formatted the final part of the poem:-) hugs Jan xx Darren White May 16, 2017 at 5:07 AM Hahaha Jan, sensual, eh? I love that part of the film :) Shame I can't dance anymore, or I would swim across the Canal and a bit further, and teach you ;) Jan Allison May 16, 2017 at 4:43 AM PHWARRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR just watched the clip oh Richard Gere and Colin Firth ... I need a cold shower now !!!:-) hugs Jan xx