Nette Onclaud Poet Free verse

Tangled Vines

Twilight, stay with me
 in hours between wrong and right;
 when confessions are murmured 
upon this life half done,
 that past mid-life, 
I ask for reprieve to settle 
unsolved desires those which 
enable my fears a choking 
of seasons' absence-

 Northwinds may be cold ,
cruel but now I hold 
eventide's fire with passion unbending

Contest: Heart and Soul by Kelly Deschler

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Connie Marcum Wong March 24, 2014 at 3:25 AM Wow! I loved this one Nette. It would be at the top for me. I am fav'ing this one. Congrats on your win!

Frederic Parker March 19, 2014 at 9:11 PM congrats on your win, a very visual poem

Poet Destroyer A March 19, 2014 at 4:20 PM Nette,. Congratulations in "Kelly D's Heart And Soul, contest." Always & Forever *XOX* LINDA

Aiyah Torres March 19, 2014 at 1:18 PM another great poem my dear... a big congratulations!!!! .. ^__^

Dr.Ram Mehta March 19, 2014 at 1:31 AM Congratulations on the fine win, enjoyed yoiur write on Heart and soul, nette

Skat A March 18, 2014 at 10:13 PM Nette, you put A lot of Heart And Soul into your writing, enjoyed your winning poem.... Love ~SKAT~

Roger Horsch March 18, 2014 at 7:25 PM Only you could write such a wonderful poem. Congrats Nette on your win.....Hugs.....Roger

Sara Kendrick July 30, 2013 at 2:42 PM Ahhh!! Excellent poetic quality in this winning work..Congrats on your win..Sara

Richard Lamoureux July 3, 2013 at 8:34 AM I love going on these nature trips, your imagery is exquisite.

Andrea Dietrich July 2, 2013 at 11:16 PM Such imagery, Nette. And I just saw the November poem of yours that Debs showed at her blog. that one is super amazing!

Russell Sivey July 2, 2013 at 8:21 PM You have impressed me with your language here with this enlightening write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this delightful poem this evening, especially the lines, "...She strides down the lane, to cross a wooden bridge, Until arms of ocean crest below her throbbing feet..." those lines are so beautiful Nette! What an amazing piece, such an incredible poem, Great Work!!

Tim Ryerson July 2, 2013 at 5:49 PM Ring-a-ding-ding...Soup mail for you, Nette (You bet!)

Karen Anglesey July 2, 2013 at 5:41 PM nette, good grief, you are a poetic genius. You illuminate the page with perfection. I am absolutely a fan :)

Poet Tacito July 2, 2013 at 2:05 PM Why do you keep writing such strong poems so quickly?! :) No wonder you start to get restless 3 hours after I post a poem. ;) This piece was absolutely mesmerizing. Ah, the power of memories. Both broken & otherwise...

Sara Kendrick July 2, 2013 at 12:26 PM Very descriptive and expressive work..It was like being there at the shore..Enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for the visit to my work..Sara