Michael J. Falotico Poet Senryu

Tangled Up

by Michael J Falotico


                                                lips moist with passion..
                                             trembling in the knees grow..
                                                 hands not lost in dark..

                                                 toes wiggle and touch..
                                             legs tangled in morning heat..
                                                 eyes rolled back in love..

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Poet Destroyer A April 21, 2011 at 5:35 PM I will start here Michael , with your tangled poem... still you have geat and wonderful passion in your words... I miss your poetry and many others... sorry i missed alot... i see lots of good titles... i will read in a later date... but if you have one that you know ill enjoy... point me the way... ill be back to read more.. starting here ..take care..,,p.d.

Carolyn Devonshire April 3, 2011 at 10:35 AM Ahh, so passionate, Michael. We shold all have someone to "tangle up" with in our lives. Beautifully stated! Love, Carolyn

Sara Kendrick April 2, 2011 at 1:36 PM Very romantic and passionate work..I am glad that I chose this one to read this afternoon..Your presence at my work was uplifting..Sara

Wilma Neels April 2, 2011 at 12:38 PM Your morning seems to have been better than mine Michael :) lol.. sensual and promising senryu ;) Class was good thanks just sucks that I have another one next week.. How's your Saturday going? love Wilma

Tahera Mannan April 2, 2011 at 6:17 AM Oooh hot and lovely. Some super images.

Dr.Ram Mehta April 2, 2011 at 5:40 AM Very sensual and spicy, Good Morning, Michael and thanks for my placement in your contest,