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Lost in a maze of dreams where nothing is as it seems, - but then again, it never really was - My heart is held captive behind an image, one of ghosts past why do you leave me, so tangled inside reaching beyond this reality for, sanity and peace of mind? Set these vines that bind free, release them from my soul ____________________ Author's Note~ I am not one to dwell in the deep and dark, shadows of nevermore. However, these emotions did touch my being many years ago. They held my heart. Also, I was asked if I could post something here in this category. September 1st, 2018. ~ Poem of the Day

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Sunlite Wanter

Date: 9/29/2018 11:08:00 AM

"Tangled inside" is very expressive of how we are from time to time. Enjoyed your poem so much.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 9/29/2018 3:43:00 PM

You are correct. This emotion has tangled around many hearts- I am sure it still does. Which is very sad. Thank you for your kind words. ~ Brandy

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 9/20/2018 8:40:00 AM

Hello Brandy, well you did a good job,your created this poem very well. Have a nice day my friend.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 9/20/2018 12:42:00 PM

Hi Darlene, your thoughts are appreciated. Thank you for stopping by to read this poem. I hope you have a wonderful day. ~ Brandy

Tobey Hill

Date: 9/10/2018 12:57:00 PM

Sorry that I'm late to the party..My congrats to you on this wonderful and well deserved POTD! May your pen continue it's flow....TAH

Brandy Nicole
Date: 9/10/2018 6:55:00 PM

It's okay Tobey, no worries. Thank you for your kind words and congratulations. You and your thoughts are appreciated. ~ Brandy

Gershon Wolf

Date: 9/4/2018 3:03:00 AM

You have expressed the emotions of so many, I expressed, with this heartfelt poem, Brandy. Congratulations on your richly deserved POTD. Best wishes, Gershon

Brandy Nicole
Date: 9/4/2018 12:49:00 PM

Thank you Gershon. Emotions such as these have tangled around me and my heart. I appreciate your kind words and congratulations. ~ Brandy

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 9/2/2018 7:39:00 PM

Congratulations on having this insightful deserving poem honored with POTD Brandy!

Brandy Nicole
Date: 9/2/2018 9:15:00 PM

Thank you Connie. Your thoughts are appreciated. I am still in awe that this poem was chosen. ~ Brandy

Sunlite Wanter

Date: 9/1/2018 12:12:00 PM

I find myself tangled sometimes, and then uncurled and straightened out. Your poem is very descriptive. Congratulations!

Brandy Nicole
Date: 9/1/2018 12:54:00 PM

Yes, this happens. Sometimes, we tangle ourselves in such moments, and then- there are times when- someone almost squeezes the heart too tight, and we can't break free. Thank you for your thoughts and congratulations. ~ Brandy

Joseph May

Date: 9/1/2018 11:28:00 AM

Very nicely penned Brandy..Congrats on POTD..

Brandy Nicole
Date: 9/1/2018 12:49:00 PM

Thank you Joseph. I appreciate your kind words and congratulations. ~ Brandy

Charlie Smith

Date: 9/1/2018 10:11:00 AM

Very well done Brandy, congratulations for POTD honors...

Brandy Nicole
Date: 9/1/2018 12:49:00 PM

Thank you Charlie. Your thoughts are appreciated. ~ Brandy

Susan Ashley

Date: 9/1/2018 9:46:00 AM

Congratulations on your wonderful and well deserved recognition with POTD honors for your exquisite poem of dark emotions, Brandy. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Brandy Nicole
Date: 9/1/2018 12:48:00 PM

Thank you Susan. Your thoughts mean so much. I appreciate you and your kindness. My heart felt this, many years ago. Many blessings to you. ~ Brandy

Maria Williams

Date: 9/1/2018 8:35:00 AM

Congratulations on POTD Brandy. Just beautiful....Maria

Brandy Nicole
Date: 9/1/2018 12:46:00 PM

Thank you Maria. I appreciate you and your thoughts. ~ Brandy

Warren Doll

Date: 9/1/2018 8:04:00 AM

Congratulations on POTD, Brandy. Well done.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 9/1/2018 12:46:00 PM

Thank you Warren. Your thoughts are appreciated. ~ Brandy

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 9/1/2018 8:02:00 AM

Congratulations on potd Brandy, a deeply affecting piece. xomo

Brandy Nicole
Date: 9/1/2018 12:45:00 PM

Thank you Maureen, for your kind words and congratulations. These moments held my heart years ago. ~ Brandy

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/1/2018 7:53:00 AM

Congrats Brandy on poem of the day--well done, indeed!

Brandy Nicole
Date: 9/1/2018 12:40:00 PM

Thank you Vijay. Your thoughts are appreciated. ~ Brandy

John Gondolf

Date: 9/1/2018 7:13:00 AM

Brandy, a big congrats on POTD!!! John

Brandy Nicole
Date: 9/1/2018 12:39:00 PM

Thank you John. I had no idea this poem would be chosen. I appreciate you and your thoughts. ~ Brandy

Charles Messina

Date: 9/1/2018 7:08:00 AM

Such a beautiful poem, Brandy. I have felt these deep and dark emotions myself years ago. Excellent write and Congratulations on your very well deserved POTD :) ~Charlie

Brandy Nicole
Date: 9/1/2018 12:34:00 PM

Thank you Charlie. I am sure many can relate to these words. I am still in awe that this poem was chosen. I appreciate you and your thoughts. Many blessings to you. :) Brandy

Robert Lindley

Date: 9/1/2018 6:01:00 AM

Back again to give congratulations on your beautiful poem receiving POTD honors my friend.. A truly inspiring piece...

Brandy Nicole
Date: 9/1/2018 11:47:00 AM

Thank you Robert! I appreciate you and your thoughts. Your kindness. I hope you are feeling much better. ~ Brandy

Winged Warrior

Date: 9/1/2018 4:13:00 AM

Congrats!!! Brandy on your POTD!...I knew you would...a great write deserves recognition...now let me see if you can go even deeper lol...love & deep...^WW^

Brandy Nicole
Date: 9/1/2018 11:41:00 AM

Thank you Winged Warrior! I wasn't expecting this. I am almost speechless. You want to see me write something deeper, more? I can and have. ~ Brandy

Sylvia Coulstock

Date: 8/31/2018 8:44:00 AM

Sometimes words escape me when I read your poetry,all I will state is Brandy you have a magic touch that always reaches deep into me and opens up my heart and mind. Thank you.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 8/31/2018 10:51:00 AM

Your thoughts always mean so much. Your support is greatly appreciated. Thank you June. Your kind words touch my heart. ~ Brandy

Winged Warrior

Date: 8/30/2018 7:02:00 PM

Superbly done my friend...your darkness shines, Brandy...when we draw on deep emotions and blend them with our fragile hearts...great poetry spews out...loved every syllable...light & dark...^WW^

Brandy Nicole
Date: 8/30/2018 8:14:00 PM

These emotions tangled around my world, and my heart. Thank you Winged Warrior, for favoring this poem and for your amazing thoughts. Maybe I will post another poem such as this, in the future. Yes, light and darkness collide. ~ Brandy

Winged Warrior
Date: 8/30/2018 7:02:00 PM

...oh, and a FAV...

Robert Lindley

Date: 8/30/2018 3:32:00 PM

If one has truly lived and lived for love--then having been tangled inside comes with the territory- ghosts and all-- it seems. Exceptional and brilliant poetry my good friend.... A fav.....

Brandy Nicole
Date: 8/30/2018 4:19:00 PM

You are right Robert!! There will always be twists and turns- moments that tangle, when you live. Also when you love. I appreciate you and your thoughts. Thank you for placing this as one of your favorites. ~ Brandy

Chris Green

Date: 8/30/2018 2:41:00 PM

You words always carry such a soft and alluring feel to them, no matter what the theme. This was really nice.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 8/30/2018 4:17:00 PM

Thank you Chris. I appreciate you saying this about me, and my poetry. Your thoughts mean so much. ~ Brandy

Rico Leffanta

Date: 8/30/2018 2:04:00 PM

Nothing warms the heart like a dash of Brandy! Aloha! Rico

Brandy Nicole
Date: 8/30/2018 4:14:00 PM

Thank you Rico. Your thoughts bring a smile. :) Brandy

Tim Smith

Date: 8/30/2018 12:28:00 PM

Sometimes things try to draw us to the past but we have to move forward

Brandy Nicole
Date: 8/30/2018 1:18:00 PM

Yes, I completely agree. It is best to move forward. Thank you Tim. I appreciate your thoughts. ~ Brandy

John Gondolf

Date: 8/30/2018 9:48:00 AM

Probably most have experienced these same feeling at some point in their lives, you have penned it well, Brandy. John

Brandy Nicole
Date: 8/30/2018 10:24:00 AM

Thank you John. Yes, I am sure many can relate to these emotions. Your kind words are appreciated. ~ Brandy