Frances Schiavina Poet Tanka

Tangled As Roots

Tangled puzzled thoughts
Like thirsty roots seek solace
By liquid waters 
Murmuring serenity
Flowing to eternity

First Place Winner: Brian Strand-Fusion A short Form-12/7/20
Honorable Mention: Line Gauthier-Bite Size poem No 71-9/14/23

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Sam Kauffman December 7, 2020 at 12:24 PM Congratulations on your win, Francis. Your choice of words - "tangled, puzzled," "roots seek solace" - and imagery create a magic and mystical picture. Wonderful tanka! All the best!

Carol Mitra December 7, 2020 at 4:56 AM Root of the matter....Congrats on your win Frances :)

Mahtab Bangalee May 23, 2020 at 11:21 AM Thought the roots of serinity !