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Tangled As Roots

Tangled puzzled thoughts Like thirsty roots seek solace By liquid waters Murmuring serenity Flowing to eternity First Place Winner: Brian Strand-Fusion A short Form-12/7/20 Honorable Mention: Line Gauthier-Bite Size poem No 71-9/14/23

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Date: 12/7/2020 12:24:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Francis. Your choice of words - "tangled, puzzled," "roots seek solace" - and imagery create a magic and mystical picture. Wonderful tanka! All the best!
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Date: 12/7/2020 4:56:00 AM
Root of the matter....Congrats on your win Frances :)
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Date: 5/23/2020 11:21:00 AM
Thought the roots of serinity !
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