Tangled

Laying beside you in this heavy air
I turn to take in your sultry stare
A desire to taste you fills my mind
To pull you in while taking my time
Lowering closer indulged in wanting
My weakness for you almost haunting
Making a way around your naked body
Every bit of you begins to taunt me
Softness curling around your nipple
Being this close is never as simple
I press to you while you hold tight
Tangled in sweat until we see light

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 2/26/2013 7:56:00 AM
wonderful
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Date: 2/14/2013 2:19:00 AM
"!!!"
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Date: 2/12/2013 4:35:00 PM
Love this too! Perfect rhyming and flow; beautiful imagery. Always, Annalise
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Date: 2/11/2013 12:18:00 AM
Awe.. beautifully written. very sensual and erotic in true form. thank you for reading me i appreciate it.
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Date: 2/10/2013 1:31:00 PM
Wow, Gigno...very erotic and sensual but done with respect and good taste as well...Great work and thanks for the !!!'s...
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Date: 2/10/2013 11:50:00 AM
I like this,,,, going to favorites,,, I've written a few in this order. Thank you for reading "spread my wings" ;} you have a blessed day !
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Date: 2/8/2013 9:42:00 PM
Damn thats hot. I really liked that one...Think im gonna share it with my "Friend"
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Date: 2/4/2013 10:54:00 PM
It's a sensual poem without being vulgar. That is really nice!!
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