Tangled

Laying beside you in this heavy air
I turn to take in your sultry stare
A desire to taste you fills my mind
To pull you in while taking my time
Lowering closer indulged in wanting
My weakness for you almost haunting
Making a way around your naked body
Every bit of you begins to taunt me
Softness curling around your nipple
Being this close is never as simple
I press to you while you hold tight
Tangled in sweat until we see light
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Bolden Avatar
February 26, 2013 at 7:56 AM
wonderful
Poet Avatar
February 14, 2013 at 2:19 AM
"!!!"
Haick Avatar
February 12, 2013 at 4:35 PM
Love this too! Perfect rhyming and flow; beautiful imagery. Always, Annalise
Thieleke Avatar
February 11, 2013 at 12:18 AM
Awe.. beautifully written. very sensual and erotic in true form. thank you for reading me i appreciate it.
Ryerson Avatar
February 10, 2013 at 1:31 PM
Wow, Gigno...very erotic and sensual but done with respect and good taste as well...Great work and thanks for the !!!'s...
Duncan Avatar
February 10, 2013 at 11:50 AM
I like this,,,, going to favorites,,, I've written a few in this order. Thank you for reading "spread my wings" ;} you have a blessed day !
Loveless Avatar
February 8, 2013 at 9:42 PM
Damn thats hot. I really liked that one...Think im gonna share it with my "Friend"
Dietrich Avatar
February 4, 2013 at 10:54 PM
It's a sensual poem without being vulgar. That is really nice!!
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