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Tangible Dreams

keep your eye on the prize tangible dreams not the pot-holed road once paved with hope the dust now settled on past fantasy perspective sought indelibly gained live the lesson from what remains

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 1/15/2010 7:12:00 AM
wonderful wise free verse. JB. enbjoyed .
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Date: 1/15/2010 6:43:00 AM
I like it but I think in the first line you meant to put the word 'eye' in, it would make more sense that way. But nice sentiments.
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