Tangible Dreams

keep your eye on the prize
tangible dreams
not the pot-holed road
once paved with hope
the dust now settled
on past fantasy
perspective sought
indelibly gained
live the lesson
from what remains
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Dufresne Avatar
January 15, 2010 at 7:12 AM
wonderful wise free verse. JB. enbjoyed .
Mclaughlin Avatar
January 15, 2010 at 6:43 AM
I like it but I think in the first line you meant to put the word 'eye' in, it would make more sense that way. But nice sentiments.
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