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WSritten 27 September from bed at home

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Tangerine Skyline


Sun now dips down low
Twilight starts to glow
Tangerine skyline
At distance align
Like a honeyed dream
Beside a soft stream.
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September 28, 2026 at 5:36 AM
A lovely, tightly woven six-line sunset vignette. The paired rhymes create a gentle, songlike flow, while “tangerine skyline” and “a honeyed dream” give the fading light a warm, luminous softness. Happy to see you writing during this time.❤️🌹
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September 28, 2026 at 9:13 AM
Thank you pet friend for appreciating the above poem, your inspiring comments and kind wishes. In fact, poetry is to some extent a relief to my pains, a friend in my loneliness, a medium to scan down my inner self.....You may wish to see my poem "Dear Poetry" to get a glimpse of what poetry means to me. ..Sending you the blessings of light.
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