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Tangerine Dreams

ultramarine unfathomable sky, with a hue of gorgeous crimson from the east, 
                 sometimes just hint of a dazzling mystifying dot, 
        a red dot on the forehead of an enchanting woman from the orient, 
          then it grows larger and larger, enveloping the ruby-red horizon, 
                      a few white pristine clouds floating carefree, 
                  bringing tangerine dreams from the yonder hills
our omnipotent creator has announced his grand arrival, but hasn't arrived yet.
                                    moment of realization - 
           the world wouldn’t be the same without you, and without me. 



   
                          A Brian Strand 2 to 14 lines Poetry Contest
                   
                                    Posted on August 14, 2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Alex Avatar
August 17, 2021 at 7:23 PM
our omnipotent creator has announced his grand arrival, but hasn't arrived yet. - Expectant Waiting. Beautiful.
Kauffman Avatar
August 17, 2021 at 11:20 AM
Congratulations for you win Mala. A rainbow of hues is captured in your lines. But I love your conclusion best of all as each of us is needed and each of us is necessary! Well done dear friend. Much love and many hugs!
Rose  Avatar
August 14, 2021 at 2:15 PM
Well you sure inspired me Mala with this colorful poem for of beauty, Thank you for sharing God bless :)
Ray Choudhury Avatar
August 14, 2021 at 3:28 PM
Thanks, Rose. Really appreciate your lovely inspiring words.
De Beaulieu Avatar
August 14, 2021 at 12:24 PM
Hello Mala, oh such a beautiful sunset glowing in the water. Breath taking beautiful sunset. Friendship & Love. Darlene.
De Beaulieu Avatar
August 15, 2021 at 10:37 AM
Hello Mala, yes sunsets are hard to describe you did it very well. love & Friendship Darlene
Ray Choudhury Avatar
August 14, 2021 at 3:29 PM
Thanks, Darlene. Sunset is beautiful, isn't it? Hard to describe! Love ~ Mala
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