Notes About The Poem
This is an extract taken from my own poem  "The scenes of Korea". I had been lucky enough to observe the ritual while on a visit long back

Tanabata Ritual

Walk softly and watch
The rite of Tanabata
taking away nebuta.

People write wishes
On paper strips tied to tree
Mostly to a bamboo tree

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Dt. 27-8-2013
This was my first poem after my comeback on the soup. 

Contest: New Poem 
9th place win

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*Tanabata (???, meaning "Evening of the seventh moon") is a Japanese star festival, originating from the Chinese Qixi Festival
** Nebuta meaning sleepiness
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A  Avatar
September 20, 2013 at 8:36 AM
Dr Ram, enjoyed your winning poem. Hugs*SKAT
Deschler Avatar
September 16, 2013 at 4:53 PM
A very interesting and unique poem! Nicely done! Congratulations on your win, as well! ...Thank you so much for the nice comments!
Taylor Avatar
September 15, 2013 at 8:03 PM
Congrats - Nice going - welcome back. Ralph
Morgan Avatar
September 15, 2013 at 6:16 AM
Congrats on your win.Morgan
Ndlovu Avatar
September 15, 2013 at 4:35 AM
Congrats on your win!!!! this piece is so spiritual. ^_^ Y.L.N
A   Avatar
September 14, 2013 at 6:21 PM
Dr Ram, congratulations!!! Thanks for supporting my contest with this amazing poem and imagery. If you'd like:-) stop by my latest poem ""The Wind."" OR blog! "Tears in Heaven" http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_blogs/blog_detail.aspx?BlogID=15911&PoetID=18720 --take care Always & Forever <3 Linda
Sharma Avatar
September 3, 2013 at 8:12 AM
wishes and desires keep us going and indeed sleepless sometimes!!
Devnath  Avatar
September 1, 2013 at 11:50 AM
Beautiful poem enjoyed after a long time from you. Loved always, bl
Maverick Avatar
August 27, 2013 at 10:48 PM
I am always astounded at the many different things that people put store by Dr Ram; i think we are all at times in denial of our own insignifigance in the great scheme of things other times people embrace it..' yes a strange world..!
Mason Avatar
August 27, 2013 at 9:15 PM
Enjoyed reading your Sedoka. A new form for me. Warm thoughts, Ralph
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