Talking Cure

The sky was missing The moon was missing The young boy was sick Down with nagging fever Empty clouds hovered As I sat close to him Some dry leaves smiled I took him into my arms Fondly cradled the moment Moved my hand gently over his body Gazed at him smilingly Cradled him in my arms Tears pooled in the two glistening eyes As the regression went on Little flashes of green Peeked from under the leaves I had gathered a little history Preceding the ailment I kept caressing and chatting For about half an hour Green leaves grew, though few And at the guava tree a robin too The medicines continued Next day I heard he was better And in a few anxiety-free days Was perfectly well I must mention before I finish The boy, when a child, Since birth until he was three months Had been in warm physical touch with me Cradling associations are always a cradle _________________________________________________________ July2, 2016
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Marcum Wong Avatar
July 11, 2016 at 3:28 PM
I loved the way you portrayed hope by inserting the green color of the leaves peeking through. Brilliant Probir! Congratulations on your win.7 ; )
Gupta Avatar
July 12, 2016 at 4:41 AM
Thank you ...
Neumann Avatar
July 8, 2016 at 11:17 AM
Congratulations. I like the talking cure with the talk being simply there and without too many words. Lots of wishes.
Gupta Avatar
July 9, 2016 at 12:20 AM
Thank you ...
Haight Avatar
July 8, 2016 at 9:27 AM
Probir, congratulations on your 3rd Place podium win in this Premiere Contest for your deep and heartfelt poem! 7 Sandra
Gupta Avatar
July 9, 2016 at 12:20 AM
Thank you ...
Kimathi Avatar
July 7, 2016 at 6:16 PM
Congrats Probir, for your top placement withg this deep verse!! :-)
Gupta Avatar
July 7, 2016 at 11:17 PM
Thank you ...
Richards Avatar
July 7, 2016 at 3:02 PM
Oh that last line simply grabs one's heart with such compassion. What a heartfelt poem this is ! Well done!
Gupta Avatar
July 7, 2016 at 11:18 PM
Your comment itself is a great prize ....
Smith Avatar
July 7, 2016 at 1:17 PM
Your words cradle softly, congratulations Probir...
Gupta Avatar
July 7, 2016 at 11:19 PM
Thank you Charlie for your kind appreciation ...
U.D Palawon  Avatar
July 7, 2016 at 9:47 AM
The message is clear and touching...nice write and congrats. I tried s'thing different. Could not post coz of constant connection problem, I missed the date. But was glad to be motivated to write to this theme. I enjoyed the poems on win list. Keep it up!
Gupta Avatar
July 7, 2016 at 10:10 AM
Thank you Sunita ...
Ward Avatar
July 7, 2016 at 2:25 AM
Very good on the whole - that's why you're a winner. "I must mention before I finish" spoils it, though. It's not a poetic line.
Gupta Avatar
July 7, 2016 at 5:25 AM
But except the first five metaphoric lines and similar two in the fourth stanza, the whole of the rest composition is in de facto prose. "... I had gathered a little history ..." are purely prosaic . Any way, this observation of a senior poet I have to take note of for future guidance. ... THANK YOU...
Smith Avatar
July 3, 2016 at 6:17 PM
Good to see you are still producing quality. I was sick and not expected to live as baby. My Mum never gave up. Nice interplay with some of your words. David
Gupta Avatar
July 4, 2016 at 1:21 AM
Thank you ...
Godwin Avatar
July 3, 2016 at 5:58 AM
Heart-tender, possibly a tear-render! The emotion and devotion are both powerful and touching. I enjoyed reading your poem very much ... CayCay
Gupta Avatar
July 4, 2016 at 1:24 AM
Thank you ...
Vaso Avatar
July 3, 2016 at 12:05 AM
Tearful and beautiful, I am at a loss for words!
Gupta Avatar
July 3, 2016 at 1:00 AM
I am honoured ...
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