Talking About My Birthday

“Say, I hear your birthday's coming up this week.
 You’re going to be eighty-one, eh?”

“Yep, eighty-one on the fifth of December.
It’s a fairly easy day to remember, as you'll see,
I could surely use a tune-up or at least a tweak.
The mind great, but the body’s getting frail.”

“Let’s see. That’s two days before Pearl Harbor.
I’ll bet your mother never forgot that day.”

“Nope. When the Japanese heard I was born,
It apparently stirred up some aggressive ardor.
So, some blame me for the bombing of Pearl Harbor
two days later.”

“Oh, I wouldn’t go so far as to say that!”

“Just a joke; however, I made quite a commotion
in the family, since I was born on my sister’s
seventh birthday.”

“You don’t say! Really?"

But, at the time, I didn’t consider any of that at all!”

Written December 3, 2022
Submitted to "Dialogue Proficiency" Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Matt Caliri
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Krutsinger Avatar
December 6, 2022 at 11:12 PM
" I was born on my sister’s seventh birthday.”" - poor sister! But lucky you!
Kitchin Avatar
December 4, 2022 at 3:33 PM
Happy early Birthday, Milt, mine is today 12/4, I was born the same day as my grandmother's father!
Hankins Avatar
December 4, 2022 at 7:07 PM
Well, Happy Birthday to you, Tania. I was born on my sister's seventh birthday. Oh, I think I mentioned that in the dialogue.
Bauer Avatar
December 4, 2022 at 12:23 PM
happy almost-birthday, milton! best of luck in the contest...
Hankins Avatar
December 4, 2022 at 1:04 PM
(chuckling) Thank you, Ilene. I have no idea how it will go over, but I couldn't think of anything two people would talk about, so, I came up with one, which happened the other day.
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