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He begged me to whisper dirty words - I said baby’s butt needs changing! WHISPERS Poetry Contest Sponsored by John Lawless 07/19/21

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Garima Dubey

Date: 8/3/2021 11:17:00 AM

Ha ha , I loved it Jan .Great humour.

Millard Lowe

Date: 7/22/2021 4:36:00 PM

The butt of a great Monoku, Jan. Peace and Love.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/22/2021 5:00:00 AM

- ... everyday business cards :))) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joanna Daniel

Date: 7/22/2021 1:27:00 AM

Ha ha, that's funny, Jan, loved the laugh:)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/20/2021 5:19:00 PM

When Joe says that to me, I just whisper "dirty words, dirty words" good one, Jan.

Alexis Y.

Date: 7/20/2021 1:55:00 PM

Lol! Jan, This is such a good one-liner. I was not expecting that ending. Best wishes for the contest:-) Alexis

Rico Leffanta

Date: 7/20/2021 10:51:00 AM

Winner for sure! Thanks for the laugh!

Delice Arleen Skelly

Date: 7/20/2021 10:16:00 AM

Soooo funny....Delice

Tom Cunningham

Date: 7/20/2021 12:46:00 AM

Lol, well he asked for it. Tom

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 7/19/2021 10:13:00 PM

Brilliant Jan. Poor John. The smell must have been worse than a whisper. Hugs xxoo

Gershon Wolf

Date: 7/19/2021 7:33:00 PM

Jan, you've outdone yourself this time. What a total ROAR! When are you opening your call-in line for horny hunks and honeys? lol. ~ Gershon

L Milton Hankins

Date: 7/19/2021 2:39:00 PM

Superb, Jan. LMAO. Guess what he'll get only if he changes the baby's diaper???

Jan Allison
Date: 7/19/2021 4:09:00 PM

lol, I hope John appreciates the humour I was working on another poem but wasn't happy with the direction it was going so went for a silly one liner:-) hugs Jan xx

Terry Flood

Date: 7/19/2021 2:24:00 PM

Fun and clever poop monoku, Jan. An old favourite gag is ‘What’s the Japanese for nappy/diaper?’ Answer - a sakkapoopoo. Good luck in contest. Terry

Jan Allison
Date: 7/19/2021 2:27:00 PM

lol Terry I was working on another poem but wasnt happy with it so am chancing my luck with a one liner:-) hugs Jan xx