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Talk Dirty To Me

He begged me to whisper dirty words - I said baby’s butt needs changing! WHISPERS Poetry Contest Sponsored by John Lawless 07/19/21
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Dubey Avatar
August 3, 2021 at 11:17 AM
Ha ha , I loved it Jan .Great humour.
Lowe Avatar
July 22, 2021 at 4:36 PM
The butt of a great Monoku, Jan. Peace and Love.
Andresen Avatar
July 22, 2021 at 5:00 AM
- ... everyday business cards :))) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Daniel Avatar
July 22, 2021 at 1:27 AM
Ha ha, that's funny, Jan, loved the laugh:)
Dietrich Avatar
July 20, 2021 at 5:19 PM
When Joe says that to me, I just whisper "dirty words, dirty words" good one, Jan.
Y. Avatar
July 20, 2021 at 1:55 PM
Lol! Jan, This is such a good one-liner. I was not expecting that ending. Best wishes for the contest:-) Alexis
Leffanta Avatar
July 20, 2021 at 10:51 AM
Winner for sure! Thanks for the laugh!
Skelly Avatar
July 20, 2021 at 10:16 AM
Soooo funny....Delice
Cunningham Avatar
July 20, 2021 at 12:46 AM
Lol, well he asked for it. Tom
Buhagiar Avatar
July 19, 2021 at 10:13 PM
Brilliant Jan. Poor John. The smell must have been worse than a whisper. Hugs xxoo
Wolf Avatar
July 19, 2021 at 7:33 PM
Jan, you've outdone yourself this time. What a total ROAR! When are you opening your call-in line for horny hunks and honeys? lol. ~ Gershon
Hankins Avatar
July 19, 2021 at 2:39 PM
Superb, Jan. LMAO. Guess what he'll get only if he changes the baby's diaper???
Allison Avatar
July 19, 2021 at 4:09 PM
lol, I hope John appreciates the humour I was working on another poem but wasn't happy with the direction it was going so went for a silly one liner:-) hugs Jan xx
Flood Avatar
July 19, 2021 at 2:24 PM
Fun and clever poop monoku, Jan. An old favourite gag is ‘What’s the Japanese for nappy/diaper?’ Answer - a sakkapoopoo. Good luck in contest. Terry
Allison Avatar
July 19, 2021 at 2:27 PM
lol Terry I was working on another poem but wasnt happy with it so am chancing my luck with a one liner:-) hugs Jan xx
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