William Kelii Kekaula Poet Other

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Poetic Form: Other (Echo Verse)

Inspired: 2023 February 09

 

*HM*
UPTO YOU
Contest Judged: 2023 February 10
Sponsored by: Brian Strand

 

*Echo Verse: Focus is on End Rhymes. All lines; first and last words are End Rhymes (a word with more than one syllable, the last syllable will be the End Rhyme). The next line's first word End Rhyme should rhyme with the End Rhyme of the previous line's last word. Also, the final line's last word End Rhyme should rhyme with the first line's first word End Rhyme.

Image: Symbols Pendant by eB

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Talismans

The
imagined force is recast and concentrated into an inorganic
material.

Intentional,
possessing the owner's future with satisfying
charisma.

The
talisman, as some are known to be, is the resulting
changeover.

Better
days lay ahead of the object holders, who will be the subject of good
fortune.

Prehension
of one's life worth and outlook will be exceedingly
awesome.

Blithesome
accesses the favorable
heart.

Impart
the wealth produced, amongst
others.

Effectuators
are doubly loved for that
realization.

Fruition,
when done unnoticeably, is agape
love.

Hereinabove,
the exceptional natures are
emphasized.

Harmonized
beginnings are the effects of the talisman's
aura.

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Heidi Sands February 11, 2023 at 12:56 PM Great one. Congratulations for your win :) William Kelii Kekaula February 11, 2023 at 4:16 PM Thank you, Heidi, take care and Aloha, William

Linda Alice Fowler February 11, 2023 at 9:22 AM Lovely form William. I so love the symbols represented and the reaching out for beginnings of understanding and acceptance. Congratulations on your win! :) William Kelii Kekaula February 11, 2023 at 11:01 AM I'm pleased to cultivate and enrich others, Linda, with the vast opportunities, and I also appreciate the recognition, Aloha, William

Sotto Poet February 9, 2023 at 6:56 PM This is clearly high-caliber poetry, given the competence with which it was written. You have penned a piece of art worthy of the greatest acclaim -- by mixing renowned metaphors and an impressive lexicon in this seldom-used: echo form. This is a Fave. Congratulations on your indisputable win dear friend, William. William Kelii Kekaula February 9, 2023 at 8:51 PM Cheers, Lasaad, for your honorable endearment plus intuitive distinctions. I am truly blessed by the extolling, and definitiveness that extends to a conlusionary outcome my friend, Aloha, William