Get Your Premium Membership

Talisman Of Adoration

Poet's Notes
(Show)

Become a Premium Member and post notes and photos about your poem like Sotto Poet.


.The Universe revolves around our love. As I run through your hair with my finger, Hungry fingers supply magical grasp Lying in the gloom, silent next to each other. At sad dawn, your magic dust loses its ability. The sun refuses to leave; I urge her to shutter. You can have me any place you wish with you. My heart is overjoyed, and it may flutter. A body took a fresh bath with a lilac aroma. But as my tongue is tangled by a swift mutter. The air is lovely due to our fierce, awful kiss. Today, your desired face appears to be in lyric rapture. We melt from forgetfulness into deathless love. You are my love star; all she could do was stutter. Seductive drum undertones drift in the air. As roses in the night air spread their flavor. Enthralling, mystical harmony grows closer. Her delicate, tentative touch is trying and eager. A surge of magic floods my intense emotions. As the princess of splendor devours all manners. My heart's destiny is where you walk. So long as you aim to sensual druther. She increasingly focuses on my eyes. As she sprang as bright glare or a shudder. I adore the harmonious glaucous water. As streams of thrill dismay my lover. The Queen of drama is thrilling until dawn. She was rapturing me with her love breaker. I started waking up with a genuine desire. And at Dawn flashed a ray of dazzling fluster.
Written: May 31, 2021 All Yours (Jun 7) Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Brian Strand

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 6/7/2021 1:25:00 PM
Very, very romantic and sensually stated in poetic delight Lasaad! Congratulations on your win! Fun new form! Blessings to you!
Login to Reply
Date: 6/1/2021 9:38:00 AM
Lovely and romantic to the core, Lasaad, this form is new to me, you have done well:)
Login to Reply
Poet Avatar
Sotto Poet
Date: 6/1/2021 10:49:00 AM
Thank you for your lovely comment. I'm really gratified that you enjoyed this poem. Thanks for reading. Blessings and best regards
Date: 6/1/2021 1:39:00 AM
Incredibly beautiful. Loved this poem. It has everything especially emotions and imagery. I am sure it will rate high.
Login to Reply
Poet Avatar
Sotto Poet
Date: 6/1/2021 3:39:00 AM
Thank you for your pleasing response, Victor, I'm really gratified that you enjoyed this poem. Thanks for the lovely comment. Blessings and regards
Date: 5/31/2021 9:08:00 PM
WoW! Lasaad, You have penned such a well-written write. I found it to be passionate and sensual as well. I enjoyed the read. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great evening:-) Alexis
Login to Reply
Poet Avatar
Sotto Poet
Date: 6/1/2021 3:39:00 AM
Thank you for your pleasing response, Alex, I'm really gratified that you enjoyed this poem. Thanks for the lovely comment. Blessings and hugs
Date: 5/31/2021 1:38:00 PM
This adoration of love blazes romantic hearts. A passion full creation, Lasaad. I enjoyed the tenor of your poem.
Login to Reply
Poet Avatar
Sotto Poet
Date: 5/31/2021 2:05:00 PM
Thank you for your pleasing response, Vijay, I'm really gratified that you enjoyed this poem. Thanks for the lovely comment. Blessings and regards
Date: 5/31/2021 12:53:00 PM
A tenderly romantic poem that fills the heart with desire and elevates the soul to a higher level of consciousness, my dearest friend, Lasaad! Fascinating writing. Blessings.
Login to Reply
Poet Avatar
Sotto Poet
Date: 5/31/2021 2:07:00 PM
Thank you for your pleasing feedback dearest friend Demetrios I'm really gratified that you enjoyed this poem. Thanks for the lovely and profound comment. Blessings and Regards
Date: 5/31/2021 12:10:00 PM
A gorgeous poem, with captivating imagery. It is in my faves. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it, Lasaad. Love the pictures, too. Have a great day, Evelyn
Login to Reply
Poet Avatar
Sotto Poet
Date: 5/31/2021 12:17:00 PM
Thanks, Evelyn, for your read and your generous, positive comment. I appreciated your visit.