Taliban

T errorists
A ttacking their own people
L eaving their countrymen
I n turmoil and tatters
B efore the nation falls into
A bject anarchy
N ever to rise again.


written August 15, 2021
(in deep sorrow for the
people of Afghanistan)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Callus Avatar
August 22, 2021 at 2:22 AM
Unfortunately your poem describes a sad/tragic situation which was expected to occur once American troops started to move out Afghanistan. Let's see how this political game will evolve :( Regards // paul [ps...thank you for reading my poem to Carolyn.]
Hankins Avatar
August 22, 2021 at 6:55 PM
Ah, thanks to you, Paul. I appreciated your comment.
Dietrich Avatar
August 19, 2021 at 3:09 PM
I sorrow for them too, Milt. As Edward says down here, "powerful" acrostic
Hankins Avatar
August 22, 2021 at 7:01 PM
Thank you so much, Andrea. I don't do Acrostics unless I feel they work particularly well with the subject matter. This was a natural. Thanks.
Wolf Avatar
August 17, 2021 at 9:13 PM
Nobody's 'fault' but the Taliban, though our political classes will fecklessly continue to blame each other -- while Iran, Russia, China and Pakistan all take advantage... And so it goes...
Hankins Avatar
August 24, 2021 at 7:15 PM
Absolutely, Gershon. Another international crisis with no real solution. But, it is time we got out of there. I was not for one more American life lost in Afghanistan!
Ibeh Avatar
August 17, 2021 at 6:24 AM
Powerful acrostic, Milt. Truly a sad sight; Afghan people clutching to plane taking off. Tsk Tsk Tsk. It's heartbreaking:-( Something must be done about this!
Hankins Avatar
August 24, 2021 at 7:14 PM
Yes, Edward, it is so heartbreaking. Unfortunately, there doesn't seem to be much any of us can do about it.
Foster Avatar
August 16, 2021 at 1:48 PM
Powerful... true... well written... Ann
Hankins Avatar
August 16, 2021 at 2:33 PM
Thank you so much, Ann. It is all so sad!
Krutsinger Avatar
August 16, 2021 at 8:45 AM
It is sadly a big problem; they must solve it!
Hankins Avatar
August 16, 2021 at 12:48 PM
Somebody must 'cause you and I sure can't!
Rodrigues Avatar
August 16, 2021 at 6:23 AM
Thanks for this write! It is truly a sad day and worthy of anger. So many fought, died, lost limbs…
Hankins Avatar
August 16, 2021 at 8:10 AM
Yep, and it appears that it was all for nothing because the Afghani forces we trained dropped their weapons and gave up without even a fight! So sad.
Hargreaves Avatar
August 15, 2021 at 3:32 PM
It is worrying what is happening. Has all that effort and investment that was done in good faith now come to nothing? I hope and pray that the people of Afghanistan can find a way ahead in the free world.
Hankins Avatar
August 15, 2021 at 5:32 PM
I would like nothing better than that, Tony, but I'm afraid they haven't stood up to the test, from what I'm reading in the news.
Cunningham Avatar
August 15, 2021 at 12:39 PM
It's tragic to see Milton, they'll take Afghanistan back to the dark ages. All the good the west have done over the past twenty years will soon be forgotten. God help them. Tom
Hankins Avatar
August 15, 2021 at 12:41 PM
That is so true, Tom, and there is almost nothing that can be done to stop it now. Now the blaming starts... unfortunately. But, the War in Afghanistan thoroughly defeated the Russians, and perhaps we'll get out without such dire consequences for our country. I'm sick of blaming, though! We did what we could, and it simply wasn't enough.
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace