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Tales of My Life

Once upon a time.... I am living in a lost world I am walking on a grassy road With thick and high walls on my side. The path I taken is somewhat dark I heard loud cries of slaves Crying for their own survival Made by the curse of their Lords. As I pass the grassy roads I saw a golden castles with dark knights With swords, spears and shields for wars They are out from extreme nothingness. I don't know why I am here I can't reach the door of triumph & prosperity Why the journey of my saga happens like this Digging my own grave, unhappily ever after....

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Skat A

Date: 9/10/2015 1:06:00 PM

Hi Raffy, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Raffy Relator
Date: 9/10/2015 6:49:00 PM

Thank you so much SKAT for welcoming, I hope I cal learn something new with the other poets here, SALAMAT from the Philippines.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/10/2015 12:23:00 PM

Raffy, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Raffy Relator
Date: 9/10/2015 6:51:00 PM

Thank you Ms. Linda for the nice welcome. . Its really fun and inspiring to read other poet's work here in this website. SALAMAT and MABUHAY from the Philippines...