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Blazing dusk witnessed a stir in the fire, rising stars watched them stretch their tiny wings on voyage afar to the land of honour and truth; born of ashes, undead in flames, built from fire of spirit and valour; burnt cage rebirths tales.
May 10, 2020 For Diminished Hexaverse Poetry Contest Sponsor: Emile Pinet Winner: Honorable Mention

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Date: 5/24/2020 3:08:00 AM
Beautiful poem on phoenix bird. Brings a neat visualisation in mind. Congratulations on your win too.:-) Take care.With regards~Deepa.
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 5/24/2020 5:42:00 AM
I am glad you could visualize the Phoenix rising from the ashes Deepa. Thank you for your kind words of appreciation. God bless you :)
Date: 5/24/2020 12:12:00 AM
In such short verses, a big tale unfold..I'm a poet of just 5 months old..Seems like you are much elder than me..
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 5/24/2020 5:42:00 AM
Those are really encouraging words of appreciation Jenish. I had started writing in 2006. How poetically you appreciate me. You don't seem to be a poet just 5 months old. God bless you :)
Date: 5/23/2020 11:25:00 AM
I like this very much and creates a beautiful image in my mind! Congrats on your placement!
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 5/23/2020 7:30:00 PM
Glad you loved it. Thank you for appreciating Krish :)
Date: 5/22/2020 6:53:00 PM
Hi Aditi, congratulations on your winning placement. In your imagery I see the Phoenix rising from the ashes - a wonderful image. Stay well.
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 5/23/2020 4:21:00 AM
Thank you for your blessings and kind appreciation Sam. I wrote this one keeping a Phoenix in mind. God bless you :)

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