Tale

T he story of two brothers who fought for their country, A ll wars did they fight with valour to victory, L ife did give them honour and ranks, E nd of the day life gave them only sorrows and regrets. A~D

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Chandrasekar Singaram

Date: 9/2/2013 11:10:00 AM

Great work ! - Sekar

Allen Danie
Date: 9/9/2013 9:53:00 PM

thank you Sekar.. :) A~D

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/31/2013 9:43:00 AM

- Well done, Allen ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Allen Danie
Date: 8/31/2013 4:31:00 PM

Thnku Anne for the review.... :) A~D

Cecilia Macfarlane

Date: 8/29/2013 8:44:00 AM

A very well written tale which you summed up well in just four lines. Nicely done! Hugs

Allen Danie
Date: 8/29/2013 12:27:00 PM

Thank you Cecilia... :) A~D

Vinayak Pratap

Date: 8/28/2013 11:12:00 PM

A NICE TTALE ALLEN TRULY BEAUTIFUL ~V~

Allen Danie
Date: 8/28/2013 11:16:00 PM

Thank you Vinayak.... :) A~D