Allen Danie Poet Acrostic

Tale

T he story of two brothers who fought for their country,

A ll wars did they fight with valour to victory,

L ife did give them honour and ranks,

E nd of the day life gave them only sorrows and regrets.

A~D

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Chandrasekar Singaram September 2, 2013 at 11:10 AM Great work ! - Sekar Allen Danie September 9, 2013 at 9:53 PM thank you Sekar.. :) A~D

Anne-Lise Andresen August 31, 2013 at 9:43 AM - Well done, Allen ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Allen Danie August 31, 2013 at 4:31 PM Thnku Anne for the review.... :) A~D

Cecilia Macfarlane August 29, 2013 at 8:44 AM A very well written tale which you summed up well in just four lines. Nicely done! Hugs Allen Danie August 29, 2013 at 12:27 PM Thank you Cecilia... :) A~D

Vinayak Pratap August 28, 2013 at 11:12 PM A NICE TTALE ALLEN TRULY BEAUTIFUL ~V~ Allen Danie August 28, 2013 at 11:16 PM Thank you Vinayak.... :) A~D