Takipsilim

Slowly fading Slowly walking Slowly dying Slowly but surely The sunset is not always pretty It brings forth calls from the death deity A love lost to exhaustion The heart gave up, no more passion Slowly but surely Slowly dying Slowly walking Slowly fading

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Beata Agustin

Date: 12/14/2024 9:32:00 PM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/21/2016 10:33:00 PM

Jonathan, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA

Jonathan Micah Espiritu
Date: 3/22/2016 1:15:00 AM

Thank you Poet Destroyer A

Skat A

Date: 1/15/2016 7:47:00 PM

JONATHAN, I like every line of your poem above. Thank you for sharing. ** SKAT **

Jonathan Micah Espiritu
Date: 1/15/2016 9:07:00 PM

Thank you SKAT A