Takipsilim

Slowly fading
Slowly walking
Slowly dying
Slowly but surely

The sunset is not always pretty
It brings forth calls from the death deity
A love lost to exhaustion
The heart gave up, no more passion

Slowly but surely
Slowly dying
Slowly walking
Slowly fading
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Agustin Avatar
December 14, 2024 at 9:32 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
A   Avatar
March 21, 2016 at 10:33 PM
Jonathan, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
Espiritu Avatar
March 22, 2016 at 1:15 AM
Thank you Poet Destroyer A
A  Avatar
January 15, 2016 at 7:47 PM
JONATHAN, I like every line of your poem above. Thank you for sharing. ** SKAT **
Espiritu Avatar
January 15, 2016 at 9:07 PM
Thank you SKAT A
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