Taking Wing

Taking Wing

Written by David 

I’m thankful everyday to have you by my side…there is no need to hide…I’m going along with the ride

I lived on the edge for too long now…
I will rise from the ashes one way or another
I can’t pretend that everything will be a sundae with a cherry on top 
No one is available to listen to me once more…

I was once a bird, taking wing and having so much fun…
Am I trapped in here for others’ pleasure?
Why can’t I fly and feel the sun,
Caress my wings with warm-hearted affection beyond measure?

My guardian angel of light; shimmer anew with all of your perpetual might

So I sit down and pout and jot down everything that’s on my mind
Lies chased me down…this road of frustration 
And I’m falling away into the black hole of my nightmares
I believed in you and you put me down…

Caged for no apparent reason…
Am I trapped in here for others’ pleasure?
Why can’t I fly and feel the sun,
Caress my wings with warm-hearted affection beyond measure?

I look up to you and I admire your halo, hovering around your head gaily and vibrantly…do you still abide – 

I’m shattered…and I’m in disbelief…
You disappointed me with your wolf-in-sheep’s-clothing words
I’m scared and in anguish…I need some relief
Right now… I feel like I’m in captivity, freaking out like a thousand birds…

I was once a bird, taking wing and then you shot me down with your negativity and your discouragement of plenty…but I kept on biting the bullets, so put down that gun…
Am I trapped in here for others’ pleasure?
Why can’t I fly and feel the sun,
Caress my wings with warm-hearted affection beyond measure?

D-do you still abide in the light or are you a fallen angel who fell victim to the lusts of midnight?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014


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Date: 9/14/2014 7:17:00 PM
David--this sounds like you will fly like a bird again. You have a lot of insight into relationships. Anyway, you mentioned that you have some good news. That is wonderful. Let me know when you have time if you want to. I will be here as long as I can think clearly and manage to make sense.
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Date: 9/12/2014 10:12:00 AM
Hi David hope you are doing well:)......Another Great poem right here :)-<3 Ettie
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