Taking the Plunge

Eyes locked not able to pull apart Fingers trembling matching the beating of my heart. Removing clothes one by one feeling quite shy Never thinking I would feel this high There is no control and no going back I am in to deep and sense I do lack. The power that pulls together is so so strong Something this exciting cannot be so wrong. Tongue moistens and flicks around lips Muscles twitch and tremble down to the hips Breath holding this is like a test and I can do it Feeling dizzy, eyes blurring, I need to sit. Knees trembling can I take the leap? I’ll never forgive myself, I know I won’t sleep Muscles are taut, my skin catching the light This is it; it’s going to be tonight. Looking round at the space and taking a deep breath in I am falling I know my head is tucked in My arms are stretched out to break the surface As from the 3 meter board I dived with a purpose. My fingers break the water followed by my arms shoulders and head I have done I survived this thing that I dread. I did it I took that knee trembling walk I plucked up the courage my task I did not balk.
© ~GG~ 28/08/2012
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Horsman Avatar
November 22, 2012 at 1:24 AM
found one i have not read on page 2, wow one of your really good ones like this a lot....
Cohan Avatar
August 28, 2012 at 4:58 PM
this would make a dynamite country song--so SING IT HONEY- you make me smile, thanks for that...your phriend and phiend ~free cee!~ PHREEPOETREE (to think this was written about the same time i was writing a poem about a man killing his wife in preference for a new young lady...quite a dicotomy i must say....be cool and be no one's phool!
Kendrick Avatar
August 28, 2012 at 3:37 PM
Surprise ending here..Great work..If for a contest, reads like winning material to me...I am glad that I chose this one to read...I got a chuckle..Thanks for stopping by..Your presence at my work is always uplifting..Sara
Alvez Avatar
August 28, 2012 at 2:15 PM
An exciting on the edge write...lol Beautifully written. Cynthia
Bauer Avatar
August 28, 2012 at 2:02 PM
you had me going there, so i especially enjoyed finding out what you were referring to. clever and creative!
Horne Avatar
August 28, 2012 at 11:49 AM
love the way you've described this, Mandy. Kudos to you, if for real! Congrats on all your wins, my friend : )
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
August 28, 2012 at 11:52 AM
Thanks jack it was true but many years ago xx
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