Taking the Flack

Yesterday 
her nest she made
today inside 
three eggs she laid
for three weeks incubation 
and then the celebration
but until then 
upon her nest
she’ll sit 
for her 
there’ll be no rest
both day and night 
and night and day
for her there is no 
time to play
her partner gone
for hours on end
no doubt he’s out 
amongst his friends
when he returns
so she can fly
I hear her 
talking 
whilst she’s walking
up and down
she squawks and walks
up and down 
she walks and squawks
he’s in the dog house
so to speak
he’s been too long
he knows he’s wrong
so patiently he sits
whilst taking all her hits
for going out upon the town
she’s giving him 
a dressing down
then flying off for food 
and drink
back in a hurry
for her eggs 
she doth worry
she settles down
he’s on the town
he’ll be taking the flack
when he gets back...

Written 19th May 2020
after witnessing this scene with a pair of black backed gulls taking residence and building a nest - all in full view of my balcony.  Yesterday I caught a glimpse of her three eggs, as she began to lay them - Nature truly is magnificent!

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Islam Avatar
May 22, 2020 at 2:08 PM
Wonderful write indeed. I love the subtle rhyme scheme.
Gilmour Avatar
May 22, 2020 at 5:58 PM
Thank you so much Lure for your wonderful comments and how nice to meet you. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
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May 20, 2020 at 2:49 PM
Brilliant piece Ann on the wonderful workings of nature, so beautifully told indeed. Hope you're well and keeping safe, Blessings,Gordon
Gilmour Avatar
May 20, 2020 at 4:21 PM
Oh bless you dear Gordon so happy you enjoyed my poem. I will keep you updated and I trust you are safe and well dear friend. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
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May 20, 2020 at 2:03 PM
Nothing quite like natural "Home Entertainment"! Gives you an extra reason to get up in the morning during lockdown! Well caught and scribed! Aloha! Rico
Gilmour Avatar
May 20, 2020 at 4:18 PM
Lovely comment Rico thank you, and you are so right about the natural entertainment, I can't wait for the hatching, I am like the proud Mama, haha... With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Watt Avatar
May 19, 2020 at 11:45 PM
The best poetry comes from opening our eyes... dear Ann, this was charming and your wit and lilt were brilliantly displayed. Hugs ~ John
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May 20, 2020 at 1:16 AM
Haha, I'm so pleased you enjoyed it John. Two years back I had a nesting pair in the same spot and all three eggs hatched, but only 2 chicks survived. However, it was truly magical to see their progress and when they eventually flew the nest with mother's help, I must confess I was tearful with joy. So I hope this next brood will survive to spread their wings and soar up high. With kindest thoughts dear John from Ann xx
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May 19, 2020 at 8:19 PM
Delightful, Ann. Panagiota
Gilmour Avatar
May 20, 2020 at 4:26 PM
That is so good to hear dearest Panagiota and I send my love to you all. Life is for living and that is what we must always do... kindest thoughts Ann xx
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May 20, 2020 at 3:24 PM
Ann, I am not on my death bed and have no plans to be. You know me far better! Too busy having fun with entire family, music, my freedom, my boa for dancing, poetry and Irene. ^*^ Huggs, Panagiota xxxooo
Gilmour Avatar
May 20, 2020 at 1:20 AM
Bless you sweet Panagiota, I hope you are well and send hugs to you both ^~^ mmmm With kindest thoughts Ann xx
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May 19, 2020 at 6:39 PM
Oh , what a lovely and fun sight to see Ann. I felt like I was watching it all reading this. Very sweet. I hope you are well. Take care, my friend. Enjoy ! :)
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May 20, 2020 at 4:12 PM
So glad you enjoyed it dear Heidi, I am so looking forward to the hatching and seeing those sweet fluffy chicks, who will be spotty when first born - so cute... I feel so lucky to be watching them so closely. I just hope all goes well. It is always such a joy to see natures miracles and I feel so sad for folk who never lift their eyes further than their phone screens, for they are missing so much! Keep well my friend. With kindest thoughts Ann
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May 19, 2020 at 6:14 PM
Oh what a treat! I love the great black backed gulls! They're my favourite gull. Supersized. Enjoyed this, thank you Ann. xomo :))))
Gilmour Avatar
May 19, 2020 at 6:23 PM
Thank you dear Pigeon, good to see you. Yes they truly are a wonderful sight and I can't wait to see the chicks. I had a nesting pair a couple of years ago and watched in awe as those darling chicks fledged. I am one excited 'Mum' to be, haha... hope you are keeping well and safe. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
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May 19, 2020 at 6:05 PM
What a lovely thing to witness Ann and I hope you get to see them hatch. Hope you're well Tom
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May 19, 2020 at 6:15 PM
Yes, I was so excited to see her produce 3 large brown eggs and it was so funny to witness her behaviour when 'the Daddy' arrived home, for she truly looked as though she was reading him the riot act for leaving her so long haha... I am now hoping they will safely hatch as I await their arrival. I am okay Tom, hope you are too dear friend. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
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