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Taking the Flack

Yesterday her nest she made today inside three eggs she laid for three weeks incubation and then the celebration but until then upon her nest she’ll sit for her there’ll be no rest both day and night and night and day for her there is no time to play her partner gone for hours on end no doubt he’s out amongst his friends when he returns so she can fly I hear her talking whilst she’s walking up and down she squawks and walks up and down she walks and squawks he’s in the dog house so to speak he’s been too long he knows he’s wrong so patiently he sits whilst taking all her hits for going out upon the town she’s giving him a dressing down then flying off for food and drink back in a hurry for her eggs she doth worry she settles down he’s on the town he’ll be taking the flack when he gets back... Written 19th May 2020 after witnessing this scene with a pair of black backed gulls taking residence and building a nest - all in full view of my balcony. Yesterday I caught a glimpse of her three eggs, as she began to lay them - Nature truly is magnificent! Contest Brian's Choice M Sponsor Brian Strand FIRST PLACE

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Date: 5/22/2020 2:08:00 PM
Wonderful write indeed. I love the subtle rhyme scheme.
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 5/22/2020 5:58:00 PM
Thank you so much Lure for your wonderful comments and how nice to meet you. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 5/20/2020 2:49:00 PM
Brilliant piece Ann on the wonderful workings of nature, so beautifully told indeed. Hope you're well and keeping safe, Blessings,Gordon
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 5/20/2020 4:21:00 PM
Oh bless you dear Gordon so happy you enjoyed my poem. I will keep you updated and I trust you are safe and well dear friend. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 5/20/2020 2:03:00 PM
Nothing quite like natural "Home Entertainment"! Gives you an extra reason to get up in the morning during lockdown! Well caught and scribed! Aloha! Rico
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 5/20/2020 4:18:00 PM
Lovely comment Rico thank you, and you are so right about the natural entertainment, I can't wait for the hatching, I am like the proud Mama, haha... With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 5/19/2020 11:45:00 PM
The best poetry comes from opening our eyes... dear Ann, this was charming and your wit and lilt were brilliantly displayed. Hugs ~ John
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 5/20/2020 1:16:00 AM
Haha, I'm so pleased you enjoyed it John. Two years back I had a nesting pair in the same spot and all three eggs hatched, but only 2 chicks survived. However, it was truly magical to see their progress and when they eventually flew the nest with mother's help, I must confess I was tearful with joy. So I hope this next brood will survive to spread their wings and soar up high. With kindest thoughts dear John from Ann xx
Date: 5/19/2020 8:19:00 PM
Delightful, Ann. Panagiota
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 5/20/2020 4:26:00 PM
That is so good to hear dearest Panagiota and I send my love to you all. Life is for living and that is what we must always do... kindest thoughts Ann xx
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 5/20/2020 3:24:00 PM
Ann, I am not on my death bed and have no plans to be. You know me far better! Too busy having fun with entire family, music, my freedom, my boa for dancing, poetry and Irene. ^*^ Huggs, Panagiota xxxooo
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 5/20/2020 1:20:00 AM
Bless you sweet Panagiota, I hope you are well and send hugs to you both ^~^ mmmm With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 5/19/2020 6:39:00 PM
Oh , what a lovely and fun sight to see Ann. I felt like I was watching it all reading this. Very sweet. I hope you are well. Take care, my friend. Enjoy ! :)
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 5/20/2020 4:12:00 PM
So glad you enjoyed it dear Heidi, I am so looking forward to the hatching and seeing those sweet fluffy chicks, who will be spotty when first born - so cute... I feel so lucky to be watching them so closely. I just hope all goes well. It is always such a joy to see natures miracles and I feel so sad for folk who never lift their eyes further than their phone screens, for they are missing so much! Keep well my friend. With kindest thoughts Ann
Date: 5/19/2020 6:14:00 PM
Oh what a treat! I love the great black backed gulls! They're my favourite gull. Supersized. Enjoyed this, thank you Ann. xomo :))))
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 5/19/2020 6:23:00 PM
Thank you dear Pigeon, good to see you. Yes they truly are a wonderful sight and I can't wait to see the chicks. I had a nesting pair a couple of years ago and watched in awe as those darling chicks fledged. I am one excited 'Mum' to be, haha... hope you are keeping well and safe. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 5/19/2020 6:05:00 PM
What a lovely thing to witness Ann and I hope you get to see them hatch. Hope you're well Tom
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 5/19/2020 6:15:00 PM
Yes, I was so excited to see her produce 3 large brown eggs and it was so funny to witness her behaviour when 'the Daddy' arrived home, for she truly looked as though she was reading him the riot act for leaving her so long haha... I am now hoping they will safely hatch as I await their arrival. I am okay Tom, hope you are too dear friend. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

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