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Taking Over Me

Taking over me I have loved him…, never wanted to take his life But how could I? How could I stand the pain & coldness of death Death…never thought it would come along Never thought it would come and take all my themes away For I…, I thought my immortality would last Would never be taken But I was mistaken, mistaken who to love Who to stay with, you had took my life away You had cause my death to soon You had took my perpetual life With one simple needle, with one simple push You have murdered my heart in vain I should’ve chosen you the moment it began You gave me something & now you’re taking it away You gave me love, and then you regretted your passion You gave me honor, and then you lowered down your word You gave me power, strength, and immortality! But I have misjudged; you are being ordered, being forced To take that from me, to rip me into shreds To tear my life into simple pieces & throw them in the fireplace I had to change him; to continue my breed My love for you was stronger But he had all greed After my gift, he forwarded my death And pursed a blade in my shattered pieces heart And I had took betray from both sides And chose the one who had nothing to hide…

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 4/13/2010 10:27:00 AM
THANK u !!
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Date: 4/13/2010 8:03:00 AM
Strong write... with strong words!!
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