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Poetic Form: Italian Sonnet
Inspired: 2024 August 19
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"Mom." "Back so soon." "Michelangelo sculpt his heart out--a goddess." "Blasphemy." "Dreamt you up, he did--and no, it's true." "Your breadth is solid." "My breath?" "About, pops, your bronzed god." "No, 'twas an award statue." "That prompts you to ask him for a date ..." "A swim." "Depth for many seasons to check out, the eighth wonder of the world." "John..., Until the twelfth ..." "Mama, I'm here, Mama" "My son." "Chimney stack goes off, like pops." "Your dad ... my husband that you bring back to life, we're all foible." His messy desk, but he knows it, angry when I first cleaned HIS mess--divine sanction, we're blessed ...," "Mom ... (sigh) ... you're also my angel."

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