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Taking Next Step Up Rather Not 2 Far

I for 1 Am all for taking The next big step up So long as that next step Doesn't require anyone Stepping on or over Those who 1st helped them take baby steps That lead you to the bottom step and in doing so inspired your desire to climb at all Like when after winning a major tournament achieving said sought success The second after you sack that very coach that got you and set you on your winning way and path Then stepping on or over there dreams is a price worth willing to pay Rather not a step to far Because to me that would be a crushing blow And the greatest loss or all Because any victory devoid without one's friends to compliment and celebrate with Is as hollow and as empty as the heart that is willing to cast's aside Those who should mean the most Simply in order to get what they want

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Date: 11/5/2021 12:33:00 AM
Your thoughts are always so deep my friend, this is a puzzle, but I guess your title would be the essence of your write move cautiously and carefully in life - my interpretation. Hugs and blessings. Jennifer.
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Christopher Flaherty
Date: 11/6/2021 7:12:00 PM
Cheers thanking you once again and as always Mev Jennifer. Your comments are so inspirational and uplifting. Hugs and blessings

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