Taking Bare of Yourself

Taking Bare of Your Self

Reflecting on the silent moments when the Self absorbs itself
Tim is called preposterous a villain and contentious narcissist

He looks into the mirror ponders on ponds of accusations
Yet hurts no others rejects a portion of what he recovers

No aggression no hurting others no transgressions he simply
Choses to take a good honest look at the prism of his meaning

The surface surges with a splatter as he views beyond the
Grimace of distortion salvages and abandons faulty grins

In the nude he dives into the wrinkled waters of salty tears
Mediates in breathless meditation sheds weight and anger

Takes care of his truth at the bottom of uncertain sediments
Strips groundless fearsome fathom fragments and thus retrieves

Bystanders do not like that he appears to be marvelling when
He only begs to differ from others and himself before he rises

Dissents consents dissolves ambivalence does not retaliate
False censorship of crowds that cannot will not wish to see

When onlookers label in projection and throw a stone he catches
What matters to him and walks away with kindness towards himself

20th July 2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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July 21, 2018 at 2:31 AM
Kai, an introspective and inspirational look into Tim.. I love this!!
Neumann Avatar
July 21, 2018 at 3:02 AM
Thank you Lyric Man. Tim is my new character. Also in an autobiographical memoir...
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July 20, 2018 at 8:32 AM
Amazing poetry, love the subject matter, and the construction of the words, excellent read. Love it. Harry
Neumann Avatar
July 21, 2018 at 3:03 AM
Thank you very much for that. Kind wishes, Kai
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July 20, 2018 at 5:44 AM
Personal beliefs comes from ones personal experiences. One must believe in one's self before he believes in others...which Tim has done! Excellent poetry Kai...Stay well my friend!
Neumann Avatar
July 21, 2018 at 3:04 AM
Thank you. Tim appreciates your praise from an outside mirror. Kind wishes, Kai
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