Taking Aim

At the river's edge
a tiger takes a cat nap
no creatures come near
Except for one, whose aim is
to buy the lovely painting
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Marcum Wong Avatar
March 16, 2015 at 6:02 PM
Great ending to this clever Tanka Joseph. Left me smiling! Mahalo, Connie
Andresen Avatar
March 16, 2015 at 3:02 PM
- A beautiful picture ..... how much do I need to pay ? :)) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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