Toquyen Harrell Poet Free verse

Taking a Vacation Permanently

I am tired God
Can I say I revolted?
Revolt - present tense
I think I have earned my due
I will not do anything any more
You can do everything without me
I had it
I am taking a vacation
Permanently
There is nothing You can make me
Because You have told me so
- One of your gifts
Remember

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Hannington Mumo July 21, 2015 at 11:19 AM Hope you have are not going through an inner faith revolution. Otherwise, your diction and flow are, as ever, second to none. Excellent! Def. 7+!