Line Gauthier Poet Free verse

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Taking a Chance

starshine sprinkles reverie
soothing the brokenhearted

perfume of flowers sweet
in the nightbreeze travel

the moon chaperons
first tender kiss
of newfound lovers



AP: 2nd place 2021

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Timothy Mcguire January 22, 2019 at 11:27 PM I don't know how you did it, I didn't get past the instructions! But I LOVE it! Line Gauthier January 23, 2019 at 5:02 AM LOL it wasn't easy but it was fun. I will remember sitting at Margaritaville on the LV strip struggling with this one.

P.S. Awtry January 22, 2019 at 1:45 PM gorgeous Line. especially love the "flirty dancemoves" :) Line Gauthier January 23, 2019 at 5:02 AM Thanks for your lovely visit and compliment, PS.

Caren Krutsinger January 22, 2019 at 12:31 PM lovely with glimpses of allieration. Line Gauthier January 23, 2019 at 5:02 AM Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Caren.

John Gondolf January 22, 2019 at 9:34 AM I like your romantic imagery, Line, best of luck in the contest. John Line Gauthier January 23, 2019 at 5:03 AM Thanks, John. Much appreciated.

Heidi Sands January 21, 2019 at 5:22 PM Very nice Line ! :) Line Gauthier January 21, 2019 at 5:24 PM Thanks, Heidi, for your much appreciated visit and comment.