Taking a Chance

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starshine sprinkles reverie soothing the brokenhearted perfumed flowers sweet in the night breeze travel the moon chaperoning first tender kiss of newfound lovers AP: 2nd place Posted on January 21, 2019

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Timothy Mcguire

Date: 1/22/2019 11:27:00 PM

I don't know how you did it, I didn't get past the instructions! But I LOVE it!

Line Gauthier
Date: 1/23/2019 5:02:00 AM

LOL it wasn't easy but it was fun. I will remember sitting at Margaritaville on the LV strip struggling with this one.

P.S. Awtry

Date: 1/22/2019 1:45:00 PM

gorgeous Line. especially love the "flirty dancemoves" :)

Line Gauthier
Date: 1/23/2019 5:02:00 AM

Thanks for your lovely visit and compliment, PS.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 1/22/2019 12:31:00 PM

lovely with glimpses of allieration.

Line Gauthier
Date: 1/23/2019 5:02:00 AM

Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Caren.

John Gondolf

Date: 1/22/2019 9:34:00 AM

I like your romantic imagery, Line, best of luck in the contest. John

Line Gauthier
Date: 1/23/2019 5:03:00 AM

Thanks, John. Much appreciated.

Heidi Sands

Date: 1/21/2019 5:22:00 PM

Very nice Line ! :)

Line Gauthier
Date: 1/21/2019 5:24:00 PM

Thanks, Heidi, for your much appreciated visit and comment.