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Taking a Chance

starshine sprinkles reverie
soothing the brokenhearted
perfumed flowers sweet
in the night breeze travel
the moon chaperoning
first tender kiss
of newfound lovers



AP: 2nd place

Posted on January 21, 2019

Copyright © Line Gauthier | Year Posted 2019

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Timothy Mcguire Date: 1/22/2019 11:27:00 PM I don't know how you did it, I didn't get past the instructions! But I LOVE it! Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 1/23/2019 5:02:00 AM LOL it wasn't easy but it was fun. I will remember sitting at Margaritaville on the LV strip struggling with this one.

P.S. Awtry Date: 1/22/2019 1:45:00 PM gorgeous Line. especially love the "flirty dancemoves" :) Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 1/23/2019 5:02:00 AM Thanks for your lovely visit and compliment, PS.

Caren Krutsinger Date: 1/22/2019 12:31:00 PM lovely with glimpses of allieration. Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 1/23/2019 5:02:00 AM Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Caren.

John Gondolf Date: 1/22/2019 9:34:00 AM I like your romantic imagery, Line, best of luck in the contest. John Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 1/23/2019 5:03:00 AM Thanks, John. Much appreciated.

Heidi Sands Date: 1/21/2019 5:22:00 PM Very nice Line ! :) Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 1/21/2019 5:24:00 PM Thanks, Heidi, for your much appreciated visit and comment.