Louise Phipps Poet Rhyme

Taken By Depression

Why do I feel so very down?
Is this feeling going to last a long time?
I cannot laugh nor even a smile,
I hope the pain fades in a while.
My heads messed up, I cannot think,
Should i pop some pills or heavily drink?

I'm tired of *****like this,
I'm sure my chap is taking the Piss!!
Why is he doing this to me,
Flirting with my friends recently?
He says he loves me but does he I wanna know?
If he doesn't then **** it I'll just pack up and go.

I don't want to hurt anymore,
My life feels like one big chore.
I may aswell end it, no-one wants me here,
At least then my head will finally be clear.

I guess now is the time for me to go cos I cant feel any lower
than low.
I don't know if I'm ready to die but at least I will be with the Angels in the sky.

So goodbye to you all, I know I will see you again,
Finally I'm free...I see the light...Theres no more pain.

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Poet Destroyer A April 21, 2013 at 7:50 PM Louise, Congratulations with your Featured Poem of the week :-) it has been an honor spotting your poem on the soups home page. Take care, and have yourself a lovely- GOODNIGHT **LINDA** Louise Phipps April 29, 2013 at 4:30 AM Oh thankyou so much :) xx

Sasha Maharaj April 8, 2013 at 3:10 AM Im just like you in a sense where we write down how we feel instead on bombarding people with our problems. *hugs* trust you are well and know theres always hope in the end :) Louise Phipps April 8, 2013 at 7:00 AM yes I feel its the easiest way, thankyou for ur lovely words and hope ur well also :) x

Donald Williams March 27, 2013 at 8:48 AM Very heartfelt passionate Poem here Louise, I can certainly understand your sorrow and I think expressing it in this form as always a possitive way to address these feelings. My writing reflects my current state of mind and would appear that your's does as well. I enjoyed your poem and look forward to seeing more passion in your writing. Louise Phipps March 28, 2013 at 3:09 AM Thankyou Donald for your lovely words :) x

Sara Kendrick March 27, 2013 at 8:39 AM Depression is a terrible illness..There is hope..A very simple thing can help with depression and that is walking..Exercise can help lift that sad mood..Sometimes depression is signaling that the person needs to make a change in their life and I don't mean ending it but it could be they need to make a growth spurt in learning, spirital growth, or some other aspect of their life..If one is associating with someone who is pulling one down find new friends..Sara Louise Phipps March 28, 2013 at 3:08 AM Thankyou Sara, I have my good days and my bad and when Im low I write...I know these poems sound very drastic but I always feel better for writing :) x thankyou for ur lovely words x

Fred Bell March 26, 2013 at 7:59 AM i hope your heart has healed very touching indeed Louise Phipps March 26, 2013 at 11:49 AM Thankyou Fred :) I was in a very dark place then but I have got through it. x